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      What would happen when Hetmann Fegelein and Adolf Hitler arrive in Equestria? Antics,'nuff said.

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      A brony gets sent into Equestria. Nuff said.
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    Chapter 3

    I woke up yet again on Twilight's couch "Good morning sunshine!" Twilight said to me as I was waking up and rubbing my eyes "Good morning,I mean, if thats okay with you." I said trying to mimic Fluttershy. "I take it that's a sign that you want to meet Fluttershy?" asked Twilight Sparkle "Yay..." I said in response still trying to mimic Fluttershy. Twilight chuckled a bit. "Let's go then,after I tell spike we are leaving though." I nodded in agreement.

    "Spike! We are gonna leave to introduce another friend to Brony! I will leave the library in your hands okay?" Twilight asked the purple dragon "Alright twilight,but come back soon, I don't want to keep on running the library all the time." Said spike as he was putting books in their respective shelf's. "Stop whining" after I said that Spike gave me a stare and I left along with Twilight to Fluttershy's cottage.

    "Here we are!" said Twilight. "Should I knock on the door,or should you?" I asked Twilight "I think it is best if I warn her that a strange creature is going to meet her,so hide in a bush while I speak to her." Twilight said to me. "Alright,but don't leave me for a long time and forget about me." Twilight then gave a small laugh and I hid in a bush as twilight knocked on Fluttershy's door.

    "Oh hi Twilight,do you need anything? If you don't mind me asking,that is." Said Fluttershy timidly "Well a friend of mine wants to meet you,except he isn't exactly a pony,he is quite tall very tall but since you are very shy and you get easily scared I wanted to warn you before he meets you. Also I almost forgot he also knows our names and I think he may know more,so if he will probably know a lot about us,so don't be scared." Twilight said to the timid and meek Fluttershy "Oh um...okay...but...Is he dangerous? I'm sorry if he isn't and that I offended him."

    After she said that I decided to yell "Nope! I am not dangerous! I won't harm anypony!" after I said that Fluttershy eep'd and hid behind her mane and then I decided now was the time that I should show myself,but then I realized Twilight was giving me a mean glare for scaring fluttershy "Sorry Fluttershy,I didn't mean to scare you and there is no need to hide behind your mane, I was also shy once and I know how you feel about this situation,but being more shy about it will only make matters worse." I said trying to make Fluttershy relax a bit,it worked,at least for the most part. She was still shaking from fear of the large creature in front of her. I decided to be a little aggressive and decide it to hug her right there. She eep'd again,though it was louder than usual. "Come on,no need to be scared! Would you be kind enough to hug me back?" I barely heard an almost inaudible 'Okay' and with great hesitation she slowly tried to hug me. "See? That wasn't so bad!" She seemed to be still scared,I sighed. It seems like I will need a lot to make her my friend,especially since I'm not a pony.

    "You scared Fluttershy nearly to death!." Twilight yelled at me "Sorry about that,I already knew she wouldn't hug me for a long time but I just couldn't help myself and hugged her." I said while being embarrassed. "Well don't do it again!"

    "Fluttershy,how about we continue our little talk inside your cottage?" I asked Fluttershy "Oh um...okay..." after we entered her cottage a certain bunny was kicking my legs afraid that I am gonna hurt Fluttershy.

    "Whoa there Angel,I'm not gonna cause Fluttershy any harm. I'm just a friend." He seemed surprised when I said his name, I guess he summed it up to Fluttershy telling me about him. Then I gently put him back to the ground. Fluttershy was shocked at how I knew Angel's name before she even mentioned him. Twilight then decided to break the silence.

    "So Fluttershy,let me introduce you to our new friend here. He says his name is Brony and that he is a human,but being with him for a few days made me realize he isn't gonna harm anypony,so there's no need to be afraid of him" Twilight said to Fluttershy trying to reassure her. "Oh um okay...Nice to meet you Mr.Brony." I thought about something that I know I will regret doing at some point. "Nice to meet you too Flutterguy." after that I couldn't help it and I was rolling on the floor laughing and after I stopped laughing I noticed Twilight staring at me.

    "That wasn't very nice." Gee,Twilight is my new mother now? "Sorry,but I couldn't help it." I said while wiping the tears from laughing so hard "I'm not the one you should be sorry to, she is." she said as she was pointing to Fluttershy.

    "Sorry Fluttershy." I said to Fluttershy "Oh it's okay, I don't think you did anything wrong. It was kinda funny,that is if you don't mind that I think it's funny" said Fluttershy "I don't mind at all, you should learn to voice your opinions more,because being too timid and meek can be quite annoying sometimes,you don't have to go all 'if you don't mind' because the truth is,everypony wants you to voice your opinion." I said trying to make Fluttershy a bit more open. Darn,I should've really waited for the new Fluttershy episode to air before I teleported to Equestria,but then again, it's better than not being in Equestria at all! "Oh,um,okay." said Fluttershy

    "Anyway, now that we all have introduced ourselves,it's time that we both leave. See you later Fluttershy!" said Twilight as we were both going back to her library and Fluttershy waved at us while we were going away.

    After a bit of walking we reached Twilight's library she was going to open the door (Get on the floor,everybody do the dinosaur) But instead she seemed to have remembered something. "Is something wrong Twilight?" I asked Twilight "Oh um,how about you open the door?" Twilight said suspiciously. I knew it meant one of two things. One, a Pinkie Pie party. Two,Meeting one of the princesses. and then before I opened the door,I decided to do a surprise of my own, hopefully it will work. "Hey Twilight while we were walking I think I dropped something, could you please go and check the road for it a bit? It's um, round and uh, silver." I said hoping that she would fall for it. "Sure thing!" said Twilight as she trotted away to look for it. Yes! as soon as I noticed that she wasn't looking at me I decided to use the backdoor and have a surprise of my own. I slowly opened the door and I noticed that the lights were out but I did see 5 other ponies that I recognized as the mane six or elements of harmony,whichever you prefer. And to my luck they were all looking at the front door and waiting for me to open it. I slowly entered the library and got behind Pinkie Pie

    "Surprise!" I yelled as every one of them was scared to the point of falling except Pinkie Pie "Oh I love surprises! You're the new pony in town? But you aren't a pony! At least, I don't think so! I have some questions for you though! Whatareyoudoyoulikecupcakesan-" She was cut off by a hoof. I decided to open the lights and noticed it was Rainbow Dash as Rarity was scared and couldn't even speak from fear. I decided to make a good first impression on her so I got o my knee's and took her right hoof. "Hello,Misses Rarity, it is a pleasure to meet you." after I said that I kissed her on her hoof. I noticed she has a mixture of a blush and a shocked face. "No need to be afraid my dear,I am not going to harm anypony." I said trying to reassure her that I wouldn't harm her "Twilight said it will be a strange creature,but this has caught me off guard! No offense to you darling,you are quite the gentlecolt." I sighed a sigh of relief "None taken,and thank you,I do try to treat a lady right."

    Afterwards Twilight came opening the door "You tricked me!" she yelled at me. "Sorry Twilight but it would be the only way to surprise them." I said and I noticed the confused look on Twilight's face "Surprise them?" asked Twilight "Yes dear, and must I add he was quite the gentlecolt. Though surprising us did catch us off guard and scared everypony." Said Rarity answering Twilight's question. "Sorry about that." I apologized "Oh it's fine darling."

    "Hey,how about we all have a sleepover? Though I don't have a sleeping bag so I would either sleep on the floor or on the couch." I said. "I have all our sleeping bags!" said Pinkie as she suddenly got 7 sleeping bags out of nowhere. "Thanks Pinkie! Let's start the sleepover now!" said Twilight, clearly excited to be having another sleepover.

    This is going to be a long night.


    A/N

    So this is my third chapter and since I noticed it was approved I thought, why not make a new chapter celebrating it being approved? So here it is, and while I was making this I noticed a dislike,but I make these for fun. Hope you enjoyed! Abody,out.

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    Comments ( 5 )

    #1 · 63w, 3d ago · · ·
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    i think its a good story i don't know why it has a few dislikes tho :derpyderp2:

    #2 · 63w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>280375

    Thank you! It means so much to me that someone likes my story!

    #3 · 60w, 2h ago · · ·
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    getting better:twilightsmile:

    #4 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    awesome i love counter surprise pinkie pie...

    #5 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>280463 just a word of advice, try to space out your paragraphs a little, its currently all clumped together, trust me my first fics (not involving MLP) were like that and most people asked me to correct that, or didn't read it atr all becasue of this, dont wanan see that happen to you.

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