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67w, 4dHuman in Equestria
Chapter 1
Hello, You can call me Brony for now. Generic, I know, but I simply do not like to put my real name. Here is my story.
I was scrolling though various fanfictions on FiMFanfiction.com always reading HiE fictions as I have always dreamed to live in Equestria someday.
Then as I was reading a fanfiction I stopped. for a second I thought Man....It would be great to live there...Meet all of the elements of harmony...Maybe if I am lucky I will dream,about living there... and I shut my eyes and drifted to sleep...
I woke up and found myself in a forest,it was very colourful.normally people would question as to why this has happened, but I was sure I was in Equestria and that I am in the Everfree forest somehow. I looked to see if I had hands or hooves, but I noticed I was still human. I heard somepony yell "HELP!" it sounded familiar and when I rushed to the source of the sound I noticed a manticore fighting Rainbow Dash. Without hesitation I rushed and ran at the highest of my speed, I got to the limit, but I must save Rainbow Dash I made a jump on it making it fall to the ground as it swiped me in my chest while it was falling to the ground I felt a huge chest pain as if it was from millions of swords. But I had to save Rainbow Dash as she was my favorite pony out of the show and the fact that it will make a good first impression on the ponies so they aren't scared of me. After the manticore fell to the ground I held my hand up and punched it in the face repeatedly and finally after a few uppercuts the beast ran away but I lost so much blood from his swipe I blacked out but the last thing I could hear was "Are you okay?" after that I completely blacked out.
And then I woke up and looked at my surroundings and my vision was a bit blurry and I noticed shelves that had books on them and nearly everything was made out of wood. I recognized this as Twilight's library "It's waking up!" Said a familiar voice which then I recognized as Twilight's and then I turned my head to look at Twilight then I stood up and then I felt myself being weightless and noticed a purple aura around me. "I don't want to risk any chances but for now I will restrain you to the couch" and then she used her magic to tie me to the couch "Can you speak?" Said Twilight I was amazed that I really was talking to Twilight and I am in Equestria! It was like a dream come true! "Yes I can speak Twilight." I replied and she gasped "How did you know my name?!" Yelled Twilight at me "I will explain that later but for now I suppose that you don't trust me well enough to let me out of these restraints?" I said to her. "Well,that is true but I am becoming suspicious of your knowledge of my name, but I will let that go for now. Who and what are you?" asked Twilight "Well,I am human and since I am pretty sure you would like to know more I am from a planet called Earth and I possibly live in another dimension or world different from yours. But you can just call me Brony" I said to Twilight "Hm,Brony sounds quite a lot like Pony..." said Twilight. "That's the point,but I can see that we will have an interesting time together." I said. "It seems so." said Twilight
After a bit of silence, I remembered something. "Hey Twilight?" I asked Twilight "Yes?" said twilight in response "Where's Spike?" I asked "How do you know about Spike too? Anyway he is currently sleeping and-" Twilight was cut off by a certain purple dragon "Hey Twilight? Who are you talking to?" and then as Spike was stepping down the stairs he noticed the strange beast "Whoa! Who is he? and more importantly, What is he?" I stood up and said "Nice to meet you too Spike. You can call me Brony for now and I am what is called a Human. I was recently asking about you and as luck has it you showed up." I said to Spike "Well it seems like everyone has introduced themselves, everyone must still be very tired especially the Human." Said twilight "It's alright,but you have a point I need some rest. Good night Twilight" I said to twilight "Good night." said twilight as she yawned and trotted up to her bedroom I closed my eyes yet again. Tomorrow is gonna be a hell of a day,hopefully this isn't a dream and that I would wake up inside Equestria again, and not in my bedroom.
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Okay so this is my first Fiction so criticism is appreciated and I am sorry if this seems to be dull and boring,tell me what you think of it in the comments. Sorry for the short chapter but it is just a test to see if I should go on with this story.
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Comments ( 5 )
Good story so far but you did this, said that, you need more details. Plus you have too many run-on sentences.![]()
Good story so far but you did this, said that, you need more details. Plus you have too many run-on sentences.![]()
but first fiction! i had people tell me ths as well when i wrote my first fiction. ![]()
This is really good! just remember to put a space after commas and put a paragraph break in everytime somepony new starts speaking.
Okay you used a regular base for this story although it should have been a little slower like at waking up in a forest even if it's a little colorful you won't attomaticly know it's the everfree but then you see rainbow dash being attacked and your like oh shit im in equestria MUST SAVE PONY fight scene wake up in library. Why wasn't dash there with him she is the element of loyalty she should have been there to make sure he was okay. Any way good base nice start![]()







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