After his so-called reformation, Discord longs for revenge on the Spirits of Harmony. So when he is visited by Dr. Eggman, offering revenge on his enemies in exchange for partnership, he jumps at the chance. Now the heroes from both worlds work together to bring both villains down as they try to collect all the chaos emeralds... and destroy the Elements of Harmony once and for all.
But maybe fate brought these two worlds together for a greater reason. Each Spirit of Harmony has a bond with one of the Sonic Heroes, the greatest of all between Sonic and Rainbow Dash. With both Chaos Control and Friendship, both worlds combined would be unstoppable. Unfortunately, the same may be said for the enemy.
This is the constant struggle between Chaos and Harmony opened up to a whole new level.
So far reading this story makes me wish I didn't
You have a great idea
Great plot
But your vocabulary is lacking and the story dosnt have a lot of descriptions in it
For somebody who dosnt know what places look like in your story, they will never be able to have the mental image in their head on what your story would look like.
let me guess: Dash and Sonic, Twilight and Tails, Rarity and Rouge, Pinkie and Amy, Fluttershy and Cream, Applejack and Knuckles
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Thanks for the encouragement.
Anybody Home?
Actually, I have to agree with David. You need to simplify it a bit. I like the concept. But you need to slow down. Describe the environment. Spread out the plot. Don't just make Eggman suddenly appear out of nowhere. It needs to make sense. And simplify your vocabulary. Not everyone has as colorful of a vocabulary as you do. I could follow it, but now everyone can. Have a like, though. I enjoy it all the same.
I will keep an eye on this fiction and awesome work.
I seem to like your avatar pic my fine sir
Hey now no sad face
If I was trying to be mean I wouldnt upvote
But slow down bud and do ur best
Quality over quantity
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Thank you so much!
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Ok, thanks. I'll try to think about what you said in the future. I pinkie promise to keep writing, so watch out for chapter 6!
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I'm a girl. But thanks!
cool dude and f**k those s****t holes who don't like your story
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OMG HILARIOUS AVATAR!!!
And thanks!
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I mean 5!
Awesome!
Great idea switching the bad guys into the different worlds. This could make things much interesting.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale.
So... Sonic just sent the Chaos Emeralds away... again. It seems to be implied that they have the power to beat Discord, and Sonic already had them to begin with. Pretty big plot hole you've got there.
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Hey hey hey it's you again!
And thanks!
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Oh wow, thanks!
That's such a nice compliment to hear. Have you seen the guy who claimed that there were no other Sonic/Equestria fanfics? I was soo pissed...
Wow, three views in the first two minutes. I'm pleased.
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You deserve it, your works are fantastic! Waiting for next chapter!
I can't believe there are no comments.
3313590 badass
Pretty sure it's supposed to be stopped, not stooped.
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Thanks.
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Yeah... Discord just met Eggman. Even Super-Sonic is screwed.
the real reason tails put the portal five meters up was cuz they had to keep the 'Sonic falls flat on his face wherever he goes' tradition
the writing in this story is amazing! I have seen real authors do no where near being this descriptive! 10 mustaches!
3298700 hell yeah!
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Lolz!
Well, you seem like an awesome person, compared to all the other critics who disliked this peice of work. I hope it's not bad for a first story ever...
Thanks!
Oh man, that last part sounded so romancy.
PLEASE REMEMBER THERE IS NO SONDASH ROMANCYNESS IN THIS FANFIC! Just so you know!
oh... my... Celestia...
THISISTHEDEFINITIONOFAMAZINGNESSOHMYLUNA,CELESTIA,CADENCEANDTWILIGHTGAAAAAAASP!!!
So awesome!
So gooood person!
You deserve sum rainbow kisses!
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Hay, haters gunna hate.
3322953 i understand :) they're just super duper FRIENDS
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Brohoof! /)
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Pfft.
3323008 what do you mean pfft?!!
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Nothin. You just sounded kinda sarcastic. can we both agree that this chapter is beyond superextrultrawesomeazing?
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Lolz!
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I dont mean any meaness, kay? I'll explain why sonic scattered those emeralds yet again.
first, eggman actually stole the emerals off sonic in 'sonic unleashed', and that was while sonic was in super mode and was giving eggman a short lecture. that was pretty easy. so at that time sonic was dunked in a swimming pool, sopping wet, and there was a creepy dude with a bunch of different animal bodyparts demanding him to give up the emeralds or go and swim in another pool. No wonder sonic gave up the emeralds.
Don't mean to be furious at ya, just wanna make things straight.
brohoof? /)
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random brohoof recived! (\
3323020 hell yea!! awsome
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3321720 thank you and keep up the good work!
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3323059 Hmm; alright, that makes sense. Thanks for clarifying. Brohoof!
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tottaly.
You guys have all liked, right?
RIGHT?