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overlord-flinx


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One day, Twilight Sparkle walked into her library...

The rest? Well, you'll have to read to find out, right? That's how a story totally works! Hook in the reader and reel'em in! Are you hooked? Well you would be if you ready the first page already! - Ruby Rose.

A one-shot RWBY/My Little Pony crossover... For now... Maybe...

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Comments ( 29 )

Short sweet, and to the point.

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Would probably help if I knew a little of the RWBY characters... Still, I liked.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Oh hey...

Miiiight wanna change it from Incomplete to Complete if this be a one shot.

Nevermind.

~Skeeter The Lurker

RWBY?

Nice! Short little piece that makes Ruby either a brony or just a fan of the series, and a fanfic author. Pretty sweet.

If you end up continuing this, Nora is already the embodiment of :pinkiehappy: so thats something to work with.

This was great. Nicely for a story written in two hours. :pinkiehappy:
It would hav ehelped if I knew what RWBY was ... :rainbowhuh:

Ruby the fanfic writer. Celestia save us all! :raritydespair:

Oh dear sweet heaven, all you people who don't know what RWBY is, just Google it. It will be the very, very first entry. Go forth and watch.

Also, this was a fun bit of fiction. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Dainn deleted Oct 3rd, 2013

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Hmm.
For those who don't know what RWBY is, here's one of the trailers from when it was still in development.

"It's -you know- extended reality of the publicized material..."

I'm going to use that one in a future conversation.

:applejackunsure: Not.. what I thought it would be :ajbemused:
But it was interesting, none the less. You plan to continue this or leave it as a 1-shot?

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I agree. If you're setting up for this to be continuous, make it incomplete.

And you gotta continue!:rainbowkiss::heart::heart:

3295152 That's because what you thought would have ended up a flop. You need to think outside the box, dear friend. :ajsmug:

RWBY fic? Insta-faved, moving on to reading it.

I found this pretty amusing. xD
Wouldn't mind more if you're willing to write more.

This needs to be extended, the story she has seems remotely interesting and I'd like to know where it goes, not to mention how ruby would cope with the ridicule of her classmates and which of them are brony/pegasisters themselves.

Otherwise, good story!!

I... The grammar could use some work. It's not atrocious, but there's enough to make my eyes hurt a little. So many extra prepositions than needed, and ending sentences with them? I just... No thanks.

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and ending sentences with them?

"This is the sort of English up with, which I shall not put!" —Winston Churchill

Prepositions are often regarded as something you should never end a sentence with if you are speaking Latin. I haven't read this yet, but I'm pretty sure there aren't any ponies speaking Latin within it—so it's fine as far as that goes. English is a mishmash of confusing rules with even more convoluted stipulations; prepositions can and should go at the beginning, middle or end of a sentence as long as it makes logical sense.

Anyway, I have no idea what RWBY is, so it's off to Wikipedia I go!:rainbowwild:

3296752 Here you go.
I would like to see a second chapter where Lyra is writing a RWBY fic. (She ships Ruby and Blake).

3296859 ...Who the heck gave you my secret script?

3296920 Pinkie Pie leapt out of my computer and handed it to me.:pinkiehappy:

Have not read the story yet, but thoroughly enjoyed watching RWBY. :rainbowderp:

3296752 Ah, the age old debate surrounding Proposition Stranding in English!

Wow, linking MLP to RWBY. Impressive! Never thought anyone would be able to/would do that! I likey!

Well I didn't expect to find someone using my MLP/RWBY poster for anything. Thanks, I guess.
Time to get over that shock and actually read this now...

I like this. I like it a lot.

(Apple Bloom face that I can't do on my phone) "Please, sir -- may I have some more?"

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