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chaoswisp1000


A part time writer and a video game lover, I plan to write and read crossovers. If I could ever not be as lazy as I am...

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In the struggle to win the war and restore peace to Equestria corrupted ponies turn on the royal sisters and harmony itself. In an attempt to defeat the "corrupted" The Princesses allow the heads of science and development to design a cure for the corruption that takes more of Equestria's population every day. But the cure is alive and has its own ideas

"Discovering the secret of my past will be nearly impossible ... I'll take those odds."
~Shadow The Hedgehog - Video Game Trailer

(based off of SEGA's Shadow The Hedgehog).

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 38 )

I would like longer chapters but this seems good here's some Shadow The Hedgehog music for you.

You got me. I can see this has a lot of potential. I shall keep an eye on this. And just for shits and giggles, add a pony that resembles Sonic and name him Sonic Boom :pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh::trollestia:

3292488 funny that you mention I Am...All Of Me, because I was listening to it while writing this. XD

3292494 "Sonic Boom"... Might require some amnesia and chemical breach from the lab, but it may work. The thing that made shadow easier is that he was created, not born meaning it is easier to replicate in fan fics like these.

3292539 Longer chapters though plz:pinkiesad2:

3292559 Maybe, but they created shadow from D.N.A. of sonic. They had to get the sample from somewhere. I'm just throwing ideas out.

3292560 ill try me best, though I might be lazy at points and I suffer from writer's block sometimes, but I usually aim for a minimum of 1000 words per chapter, I was short on time for these first two which is why their so short. To be honest I myself was disappointed at myself when I saw that my first chapter was just over 500 words long the second one made me feel slightly better though.

3292581 according to Shadow The Hedgehog (the game) the DNA was acquired from an alien called Black Doom in exchange for...something I forget the rest.

3292593 That was a spin off by Yuji Naka to where he can do whatever he wanted to do with how he was created and his identity. The original way was Shadow was created by Dr. Robotnik from Sonics D.N.A. in order to finally stop him once and for all. But like all his plans they back fired.

3292625 Somebody doesn't know his Sonic history.:facehoof:

3293691 Nope :pinkiehappy: but it is a lot of fun to mess with people :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

3293807>>3294861 Hahahahahaha:rainbowlaugh:

Let me just say this and then i'm done. Before Shadow the Hedgehog (The Game) was even thought of, no one knew of Shadows past or how he was created. That's when fans would make their own stories of how he came to be. Yes he was made by someone, everyone knew that, but from what? I use to think he had some of Sonics DNA because he resembled him in every way. He was even able to go super. No one other than sonic was able to do that.

Okay, i'm done talking now. But keep writing my friend!!! :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

Now that i think about it, i think i might have set a world record for taking out the Egg Breaker boss. It was about 5 seconds.

3295185 But remember, that was 50 years before Sonic was born, so how did he get the DNA?

Man, i like this story. Seems nice.
Unknown: IT'S ME! *explosions* I like it too.
Me: Good luck

And so we get a taste of one of his famous chaos powers... Will the Chaos Spear make an appearance since that's his signature move?

3320484 the "lightning" coming from shadow's horn was originally going to be the chaos spear, but I think he could keep that as an additional skill in combat magic. The chaos spear will be used against other enemies in this story.

3320491 Mind if I ask who'll be the Black Doom of your story? I would not care if he's either an OC or the original or hell even King Sombra.

3320504 I don't know, anybody got an idea on how black doom would look like as a pony (I DON'T WANT TO THINK ABOUT IT!!!) but Sombra's attitude/ physical description might be used if I do a pony black doom.

3295185 looking back on this comment, it's actually not a bad hypothesis. But there are other characters who are able to go super (maybe even the egghead-man, DO NOT WANT THAT IMAGE IN MY MIND). But it's ok i kinda like the idea!

Cool sonic and mlp twist neat and i like how u used the "cure" as shadow its a good plot mybe better than my own i was wondering if u would read it twlight mercer

3333335 I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but if you wanna ask someone something through a comment, either reply to the comment or send them a private message. That way the message has a higher chance of being read by the one you want to read it.

Anyways, thank you for the kind words. And also what do you mean by "read" do you mean read aloud in a recording, or a check to proofread something?

4028745 I dont know how to stage the next part, should i follow the storyline of Shadow The hedghog, or do a different storyline, and what should happen if i don't stick to the events in Shadow The Hedgehog? :twilightoops:

"Ah, very good" the ivory alicorn said, turning to leave. She turned to shadow and beckoned for him to follow.

Shadow should be capitalized here, as it is a name.

"Whats wrong?" the purple unicorn asked. In response Shadow turned his face away from the unicorn and growled.

As a princess is Twilight not an alicorn

5676354 whoopsie, and seeing as I am struggling with school, and writer's block on my other stories, i might actually have ideas for this story....maybe....possibly.

Please Continue this fanfic

5788641 to be honest im experiencing writers block coupled with my own laziness, in other words I'm not thinking of anything to write for my stories right now...

Comment posted by Chyanne deleted Apr 13th, 2015

5789982 :rainbowderp: Does not compute(I don't understand actually)

5859502 My brain no work, and i no can write english good .___.

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