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Fluttershy. Known for her long, pink hair; but after an encounter with some mis-delivered mail and a run in with her crush, she may find herself with a shorter outcome that what others may expect.

Cover art by Bronyboy. You can find him on deviant art.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 18 )

My emotions through out this fic: :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowhuh::pinkiesad2::rainbowlaugh::yay:
Love it!

a good short fic, I dare not ask if you intentionally got the word 'scissors' wrong or not. ^-^;;

Well things escalated quickly. At least big mac got some at the end in my head

... PLEASE fix the chapter title to the proper 'scissors'. It's highly off-putting to readers seeing chapter titles that aren't even spelled properly...

She looked up, surprized.

Not that I'm trying to look too closely for errors, but this should be surprised.

He held out a ful bag at her. [/quote

Okay, REALLY now... scisors, I can somewhat understand. Surprized, eh, you should have known... But ful? Really? Not to be insulting, but is your spell-check broken or something, because... Wow. I'm almost afraid to finish the short story for what else could be lurking amongst the words...

3286689 Thank you for pointing those out. My device that I used to typre this doens't have spell-check. There might be a few more, so no garuntee. :twilightblush:

Hello. I just wanted to let you know that I read and greatly enjoyed your story! I loved it so much that I did a reading of it on my YouTube channel found here!
Keep up the amazing work, mate! :derpytongue2:

That was one of the cutest FlutterMac stories EVER!!! :yay::heart::eeyup:

Pretty funny story, but Fluttershy was pretty crazy. Kind of reminds me of those female celebrities that go mad and shave their head or do something just as drastic.

I'm not trying to be offensive or anything, but you could always scan through looking for some of the spelling errors or maybe have someone edit it. Lots of people offer that on this site.

Enjoyable and quite funny. Almost seems like something Fluttershy would do but maybe a bit on the crazy side.

Spelling errors, word choice, abrupt end...
It's not so bad that I want to downvote it, but it won't get an upvote either.

That cover art. :rainbowderp:

The chapter name is driving me insane, please fix it, it is spelled 'scissors'

I like the storyline, but can't make my self upvote it due to the very numerous spelling errors.

On the other hoof, I won't downvote it either.

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Kind of reminds me of those female celebrities that go mad and shave their head or do something just as drastic.

Nice but Im not a fan of Kissing :trixieshiftleft:

This is good; numerous errors in spelling, grammar etc but things could be worse. :yay::eeyup:

Hey give him a brake I am dyslexic so I can't spell vary well so I am fine with it just the way it is and come on like you never spelled some thing rong it naterel

A severe over-reaction on Fluttershy's part. But she does look good with shorter hair.

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