"My voice ans wavering" - not sure what is meant to be so I thought I should point it out.

>>281412281412 Yea, I was a little confused at that too.

iron horse

pony iron cross maybe?

>> maybe was but that is what i think

>>281969281969 Thanks. I was unsure but I like that WAY better.

>>281969281969 Thanks. I was unsure but I like that WAY better.>>281412281412 thanks for catching that!

this oughtta be interesting...

Finally! A short, interesting fanfic! I've been looking everywhere for one of these! Now, I have something to read on my YT channel (Whenever it is comlete). I'm glad today was the day I decided to go to the "Archive" section of Fimfiction. Cant wait till the ending!

(I actually haven't read it yet. It just seems interesting).

From,

JamesIsABrony

>>282754282754 Thanks! I hope you enjoy!

At the end all i saw was

Image: http://thisiswhyimjason.com/wp-content/uploads/thisiswhyimjason.com/2010/07/game-over-420x338.jpg

i think that is about the moment where your brain goes: F**k

Hey! Why the fuck are there no comments yet? I like the new chapter, but the gorey bit... Isn't

Actually very gorey....

KEEP THEM CHAPTERS A COMIN!

damn.........plot twist

NOOOOOOOO! Lonly comment boards ar not allowed!!!!

do i sence a

source of LOOOOOVVVVEEEE???????

oooohhhhh......kinky

-slapped-

WHAT THE HELL PINKIE!

>>380697380697 ... Which source lol.

such a nice story

i want more

but dont want to seem overwanting

>>644654644654 heh. Well when I was writing... I kinda deleted the third and final war story. I realized the next day while looking to upload it. I was not a happy kid.

Now I will truly miss Tread. I enjoyed writing the stories during my classes at school. But finals are getting closer and I saw the end of the story. I do have a new challenge for my self. You should see it pop up when I get back.

Somehow he seems to be a war veteran or something like that.

Lucky colt, having 6 mares like him.

>>670164670164 Well the war DID end, so technically he is one.

Ending duh fuck happened I mean it went from a insane 7 mare likes 1colt to like a futility thing I guess I think you might want to add something to clear that up and btw I was thinking if I had the time th make a sort of sequel that clear up the missing chunk don't worry secret love problems will appear in it if I make it all credits go to you of course

>>924946924946 I'll probably write a sequal sometime after I continue work on my current story.

The last line

"Sarcasm mode activated"

Sureeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

looks promising/relevent to my interests, I shall give this a favorite/like and see where it takes me