Waiting

Ever feel that a part of you dies inside when drastic changes occur? Like, your mind wasn't prepared to change so suddenly? Discord, the spirit of chaos and disharmony went through a major change in his life. He was now going to use his magic for good. While his body was accepting of the change, his mind and soul questions his actions.

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Shirley Not Serious

Shirley Not Serious #1 · Sep 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

An interesting take on the aftermath of Discord's conversion to good, which leaves the audience with an excellent cliffhanger.

Sounds like a sequel in progress.

TheExhaustedBrony

TheExhaustedBrony #2 · Sep 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

3277271 thanks for the feedback! Even though this was submitted as a one-shot, I'll definitely put some consideration into continuing this story.

Grey Faerie

Grey Faerie #3 · Sep 30th, 2013 · · ·

I like it, but I'm a little confused. Did part of his mind split off or is this all of his mind? What exactly is this part of him that's talking?
And, does his current mind know of this?

TheExhaustedBrony