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  • T Filling the Gap

    A romance story between the female Gothic Octavia and the imprudent Vinyl Scratch
    49,881 words · 2,297 views  ·  137  ·  5
  • E Magic Kindergarten

    Twilight goes to magic kindergarten after she sees the Summer-Sun Celebration
    31,545 words · 1,223 views  ·  66  ·  1
  • E Saved from the Winter Cold by Love

    Princess Cadence saves you from the cold winter of the Crystal Empire.
    6,055 words · 3,408 views  ·  312  ·  19
  • E The Mystery of her Beautiful Night

    The princess of the night shows you the mystery of her beautiful night inside her royal bed chambers.
    3,814 words · 910 views  ·  79  ·  3
  • T The Passing of Winter

    Luna goes to Ponyville while lamenting the end of the winter season
    4,557 words · 715 views  ·  41  ·  1
  • E Coping with a Failure

    Rainbow Dash copes with the agony of being rejected by the Wonderbolts
    7,478 words · 594 views  ·  24  ·  2
  • E Brilliance

    After the defeat of Discord, the Equestrian ponies gaze upon the sun, and meet Celestia
    10,571 words · 753 views  ·  12  ·  0

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  • 36w, 2d
    Back! Also,Trixie is the Greatest Pony

    Well, my friends, it has been some time indeed since I have made a blog post. School takes a toll on the accounting major and hard business ensues. Though now I think I am back and soon ready to continue writing.

    Also, though it may be a little late in the morning, it appears I have recently become an admin in a growing Trixie group. So for all of you fans of our Great and Powerful overlord, head over here.

    Also keep your eyes open for new writing soon.

    1 comments · 96 views
  • 43w, 6d
    The Keys to the Box Revealed

    It seems that the writers have developed great skill in what they are doing in their time entertaining us. While these episodes may seem discontinuous and unconnected to the main storyline, the last scene of this episode gives strong evidence supporting the contrary. It would seem that in the course of the 20 or so episodes from the premiere leading into the finale, each of the characters will undergo one or more tests of the integrity of their element. Rarity had the first test in Manehatten, and Rainbow Dash was given the second test when qualifying for the Equestria games. After passing each of these tests, they are awarded Ebenezers, mementos gifted to them by the people who have deemed them worthy.

    These Ebenezers shine with the glory of the rainbow, which is the symbol and weapon of the elements of harmony. Rarity's Ebenezer is the spool of thread given to her by Coco, and Rainbow Dash's is the flight wings given to her by Spifire. It would also seem that since the elements have now returned to the tree of harmony, causing their power to re-pervade Equestria, their influence is spreading to the element bearers, aiding them in their quest to pass the tests: Rainbow Dash, for instance, is given a vision by the rainbow (the symbol of the EoH), which allows her to make a decision on which team she should support in the games. And while I do not directly recall an appearance of the rainbow in the Manehatten episode, that does not mean that it did not occur. What we can, however, propose on the basis of this strong evidence, is that these Ebenezers which shine with the glory of the rainbow are the keys that will open the box located near the tree of harmony.

    EDIT: Rarity is given her own vision by the elements in the gleaming rope separating the audience from the fashion show runway. Thanks to Catalysts Cradle for pointing that out and giving great credence to my argument.

    8 comments · 219 views
  • 45w, 6d
    New Story?

    As many of you know, I write fanfiction and literature in general because I want to challenge people and ask them questions. Now in the development of such questions, sometimes I allow questionable material into my stories, hence the mature tag that some people might see on my page. Well, it just so happens that in order to pluck myself out of a case of writers block while writing Filling the Gap, I have written one such story. The issue is that is doesn't really have a question; it's just mature for no reason.

    Thus I find myself in the following predicament. I have a lengthy romance story between Octavia and Trixie ready to publish, and though I think it's a pretty nice story, I think it lowers the standards of my philosophical mission for my page. Nonetheless, if any of you would be willing to read such a story, I would make an exception and publish one like this. Thus my question for you all is that. Would anyone like to read a good adult romance story between Trixie and Octavia?

    1 comments · 87 views
  • 53w, 3d
    Writing Filling the Gap

    2 comments · 146 views
  • 55w, 4d
    Something is Coming Soon

    2 comments · 77 views
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Come, share a tender moment with the sun princess.

Edited by The Abyss

First Published
29th Sep 2013
Last Modified
29th Sep 2013
#1 · 60w, 2h ago · 19 · ·


#2 · 60w, 2h ago · · ·

Beautiful story! If only you could write more stories just like this with the other princesses...

#3 · 60w, 2h ago · · ·

quite a sweet little tale.

Thank you

Good luck best wishes.

#4 · 60w, 1h ago · · ·

That was wonderful...thank you so much for writing this beautiful piece. :twilightsmile:

#5 · 60w, 1h ago · · ·

Very well done, and after seeing a damn NLR/SE fic posted before this I am quite happy to see this

#6 · 60w, 1h ago · · ·

That was amazing. :twilightsmile:

#7 · 60w, 1h ago · · ·


#8 · 60w, 55m ago · 1 · ·

That was cute. :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss: :twilightsmile:

#9 · 59w, 6d ago · 5 · ·

Such a wonderful story.  Its stories like this that make me a little sad that Celestia isn't actually real.

#10 · 59w, 6d ago · 4 · ·

>>3273555 I can say with absolute certainty that you aren't alone.

#11 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·


Greetings Paladin! How fare thee?

I'm unsure what nlr is, but it sounds evil. I'm glad you found solace in this story, it was rather touching, wasn't it?


#12 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·


I am fine wizard.

Now how to explain the NLR... the NLR or New Lunar Republic is an organization in Equestriani society that believes that there was no Nightmare Moon thus Princess Luna was banished unjustly, and that despite seeing no signs of oppression Princess Celestia in fact rules Equestria as a tyrant. They wish to depose of Celestia and instil Luna as the leader of the "Republic" never mind that they are installing a monarch as the supposedly elected leader of a democratic republic. Their opposite is the Solar Empire which wants to do the same things but install Celestia as sole ruler. Needless to say both factions are not well liked by the Princesses.

But yes I am quite pleased to have found this story, and yes it was touching

#13 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·

>>3275465 How would you like it if he wrote another story JUST like this one?

#14 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·


I'm sorry but what do you mean?

#15 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·

>>3278048 What I'm asking is if you would like to see another story by Ponysopher similar to this, but with another princess?

#16 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·


I may be most partial (and at times biased) to Celestia but that doesn't mean I hate the others. I wouldn't mind seeing one written for Cadence, Luna, or even Twilight.

#17 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·

>>3278065 Ok cool. I'll talk to my buddy and see if I can convince him to write just that. :twilightsheepish:

#18 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·

Great fic, the details were exquisite! I did find the "you" thing awkward, but that's just personal taste, overall great fic!

#19 · 59w, 3d ago · · ·

When I saw that 8 lines were filled with description of only Celestia's voice, I knew I was facing some serious stuff, and you did not disappoint. I absolutely fell in love with this story, it's so idyllic, so sentimental, and all around fuzzy and warm :twilightsmile: Amazing writing.

#20 · 59w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

I just came here from the Cadence story.

It's writing like this that makes you want to spread your wings and fly. Such description! Such imagery! Holy crap man, I want you to beta my stories now, see if you can change them for the better. We'll talk after I get off work, but for now... WOW.

And what I just said? Was after the first few paragraphs.

I'm gonna finish now, and then I'll hug you through the screen.

EDIT: Right, done.

*Takes a deep breath, then sighs in satisfaction.*

What can I say about this? I mean, dude!

Okay, let's start from my favorite paragraph, and quite possibly the best depiction of the whole damn story.

"After a few moments she removes her caressing hoof. You immediately miss the gentle feeling, and the sudden emptiness almost rouses you to get up in order to find it again, but then you hear the sound of something unfolding. Having lost your reason and with it, your sense of reality, it sounds as if a colossal dragon suddenly unfurled its great wings and took flight. This beast holds the power of the sun in its bosom, and the air is rent as its powerful wings slice through it, speeding towards you faster and faster. You cringe in fear a little as the left edge of the bed suddenly shifts downward as though something very heavy had leapt onto it."

If anyone forgot that Celestia had power, here is your reminder.

This isn't the power of a tyrant or a manipulator. This is real, true, honest-to-Goddess POWER. This reads like something epic is about to happen! Just this paragraph alone shocked me, especially after reading all those warm fuzzies before. It hit me so hard I had to comment on it before anything else.

I could say ten times more than I have, but I won't. What I will say though is GOD DAMN, BOY. You dun good.

Liked, Faved, will Fave the Cadence story as well.


#21 · 59w, 2d ago · · ·

>>3278065 Hey, the Cadence fic is up if you haven't seen it already!

#22 · 59w, 2d ago · · ·


The Luna rough-draft has been done for some time. It just needs to be edited

#23 · 59w, 2d ago · 5 · ·

I like to think that "I'm" a young Twilight Sparkle, here. It just makes this entire thing more adorable.

#24 · 51w, 11h ago · · ·

I see a very unsubtle Bible reference.

#25 · 50w, 6d ago · 1 · ·


Subtlety is the enemy of clarity, meaning, and understanding, the adversary of the hard effort of authorial intent

#26 · 50w, 6d ago · · ·


Brilliant. :raritystarry:

#27 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·

Magnificent. Thank you.

#28 · 40w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

Ugh, such a good story, but...

If I become a morning person because of this, Luna help me I'm gonna find you and wake you up at the most ungodly hour possible.:trollestia:

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