Twilight Sparkle is the most gifted and magical pony in Equestria. However when she she finds a baby unicorn on her doorstep one night, can she be the one to show him the love and care of a mother?
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awww so cute for this lovely story you earn a hug static3.fjcdn.com/thumbnails/comments/For+you+_8a4d3fb243373778c9b663fc115b1f25.png
So this "baby" with a dark grey coat and a black mane, does he also have red eyes and a smooth, curved, red horn?
Good start, I'm interested in seeing where this story goes.
ohhh a mamma twilight fic?
count me in!
Hey, this is pretty good. I like A Mother's Love better though. I'm gonna try make this Unicorn colt in Pony Creator and send you the pic, if that's okay..
Ya New story
few error here and there, but that can be fixed...
For Example:
The door of the library opened and revealed a beautiful, young unicorn mare with a lavender coat with a purple mane and tail with a streak of pink in the middle.
Hmm, not sure what to make of this just yet. There have many 'abandoned foal' stories, usually where the main character just blindly accepts the unfathomable burden of raising a child without question... and yet none of those caught my attention quite like this has. Its initial chapter is short but sweet, feeling not the slightest bit hurried or forced.
You have my attention and my up-vote
I'm very interested to see where you will take this one.
3261961 Thank you my friend.
3261966 Thank you I'm glad I have your interest.
3262132 Thank you my friend. I hope you enjoy this story.
3262137 Thank you my friend. I'm glad you like both of my stories. Of course I don't mind if you make a picture of the unicorn. Just remember that he's only a baby.
3262146 Thank you very much.
3262236 Thank you for pointing out those errors. I went ahead and fixed them. I Just hope this story is still readable and enjoyable.
3262279 Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad I've caught your attention and Interest.
yay a new story and i love it a lot great job on the first chapter
Also Twilight had a lot of practice in taking care of a baby.
Spike can become the colt's big brother. 
3262714 Thank you my friend.
3262771 yes, yes he can.
3262888 your welcome my friend
D'aawwwww! Ith so presthouth!
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This has the making of a great story, I can hardly wait for the next chapter,
i love this story when is the next chapter and it is soooooo sweet
a big 
for your effort
3269812 Thank you very much
3265668 Thank you, I will be working on the next chapter soon. Hopefully I won't disappoint.
3265547 Don't worry, there will be more!
3262903 Thank you very much
come on twilight, we all know you can do it!
really hope he stays with twilight.
i love it
and i come on twilight we all know you can do it and i hope he stays with twilight too
I find it odd that she hasn't had to change that diaper yet.
D'awww
sweet story
Your very good at heartwarming tales
Twilight, you can become a good mother for the little colt. I know Celestia will think so. I think Spike could encourage her more, because he was raised by Twilight, and Twilight took care of him when he was just hatchling.
That could also strengthen his and Twilight relationship is sister/brother or like how I like to look at them mother/son. 
more cuteness awaits right?
You said you hoped that you wouldn't disappoint and you definitely didn't disappoint.
GunsNRoses365 where is chapter 3
3284901 I accidentally published it when it wasn't ready. It should be out now.
yay twilight is going to be a mother of this little colt now named Shadow Light and your welcome for the love and support and i love it
3284912 ok and i put a comment this chapter not this one but the other comment
cute and i love the name.
Rarely I do enjoy Celestia being like a mother figure to every pony and in this case to Twilight. I like how she encouraged Twilight that she can the Shadow Light's mother, and remind her of how she taken care of Spike when he was only a hatchling.
for some reason this didn't show as updated for me and had no idea it even was till I went through the feed I had and saw it had.
Not bad, quite a few grammar errors but I'll point them out after work... Not enough time on break.
3276754 thanks
soo sweet you can do it twilight
hnng! so cute.
loving parents are best parents.
Heartwarming chapter.
The music from the music box is beautiful. 
i love it and your welcome for the love and support for this story
sooo sweet and heart warming
Are Shining and Cadance going to meet their new nephew as well?
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Daw this is cute
That is so adorable
so whats up with chapter 5, I noticed it was posted but is now locked??
3572304 Oh sorry about that I wasn't finished with it yet and I accidentally hit publish when I was trying to hit edit. Don't worry the chapter will finished and posted in a few minutes.
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