A young filly should not be put up to this. A filly shouldn't have to face such a disaster head on. A filly shouldn't be the only one to go up against a Manticore alone. Why me, then? Why was I chosen to fight this thing? Why was I the only one willing to put my life on the line to protect what was important to me?
Why couldn't I have been stronger? Why couldn't I have been faster? Why couldn't I...
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That was short, but good. Fantastic job!
......This can not stop as a freaking Oneshot......This has huge potental!
Felt it could have gone for longer, but I was very good indeed.
I've gotta agree with everyone else. I would love to see more of this story. Its way too good to be so short.
273664
Sorry it was short. I'm really not good at writing long chapters.
273704
I'm considering [trying to begin] writing more...
273747
Sorry...
273801
>.< I'll think about continuing at some point...
Thank you everyone for your comments on this. It's very much appreciated. I might continue it, but... I honestly don't know if I can. I have horrible luck with writer's block. I struggle often trying to write more for a story and end up burning out just a few chapters in, if I'm lucky enough to get that far. >.<;
273934You should try to get into it,your really good at writing. :D
273934
I have horrible luck with Writers Block aswell.
Don't worry though; You can overcome it.
Just write a few short stories; that should get the creative juices flowing.
This actually inspires me to write a back story to my OC.
Hmmm..
But then again; This community would flip it's shit with some stuff I put in it.
(IE Terrorists, Wars, Corruption, ETC ETC)
Anyways, Hope to god..er..Celestia? You keep this up...
Cheers.
273934
S'okay! I'm that way too. It's an annoying habit.
I love this story
Oh my! This is one amazing masterpiece! I love it!
But I gotta agree it could've been longer, it truly does have potential.
Question! Due to kindle sucking genitalia, what colors are the pony on the picture; I am colorblind due to greyscale.