3 years.
3 years since her mom died.
3 years since the cruel jungle world of adventures took her mom's life due to stress and multiple diseases caught during her adventure.
3 years she'd been alone, wandering through place by place.
3 years she'd suffered being beaten and ridiculed.
3 years she'd somehow survived without food or water.
3 years of searching for a place to live.
3 years of hell on Equestira.
This is the story and path of Daphne Do, daughter of the legendary adventurer Daring Do.
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Nothing, again.
Lost.
Alone.
Hurting.
Hating.
Disheartening.
A nightmare reborn.
Her name is Scootaloo... and somehow, she ended up back THERE again.
This is her story and path....
Chapters (8)
OH...MY...BUCKING...GOD...
That was amazing!
The feels, man!
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You deserve all the likes and favs.
Thanks :)
As much as I hate writing sad stories, I've been experimenting lately with different types of stories, and it appears I am best at sad stories.... by far.
who's the father
3237352 I have no clue. I'm kinda using canon from the show never was there mention of Daring having a husband, she was a single person, just an adventurer. All though thinking of her adventures, you probably get a few ideas of who or what it could be. I try not to though, gives me the shudders lol
well this was rather hard to read im not a big fan of scootabuse lol i can see why u had a prob typing it
3237711 yeah. Scootalove is best love :3
I really hated writing this. Originally this chapter was supposed to be 2-3 times longer, I made it this short because I couldn't handle writing any more about it. I hate Scootabuse, even though im best at writing sad stories it seems I can't go that far.
My feels are being teared out of my heart...
I love Scootaloo, she is the best Filly in all of Equestria...
This must have been really really hard...
Would you like a hug?
3243245 a hug would be nice :c (I've been busy and unable to write but I should be able to continue at least by Saturday)
I'm utterly confused by this chapter. Can you explain this.
1) Did Dash, and the Wonderbolts just do what I though they did?
2) If so ... why in the flying fk did they do that?
3) Will we ever learn what lead up to Scoots ending back in the Orphanage, and why Dash turned into such a bucking d***che nozzle? And why the Wonderbolts would basically tear the heart of an orphan out of her chest and whizz on it?
3282564 you really should re-read the chapter.
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Sorry. Lol. Yeah she needs to get somepony to step into to stope what their doing. Scoots needs the Scootalove.
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*hugs*
It'll be ok...
Are you ever gonna add another chapter to this? It's great so far and I would really like to see more!
3642782 i agree with that
Guys this is my brother's account. Someone unfortunately hacked his e-mail, and there wont be a continuation until he is ready to start writing again when he'll create a new account.
4438553 I'm sorry to hear that! Best of luck to him!
Guys im back. I'll be re-posting this and Diamonds can be broken, and I will be doing new stories too.
and now i got my original account back!
Congratulations on getting your account back, can't wait for more of this story!!!
Right. It's good but there are a few things to watch out for.
1. A lot of spaces makes it a little hard to read at times. If there is a line that says, "She says" or "She said" combine that line and the dialoge.
2. You have a habit of repeating yourself like this-
3. I find the scootabuse hard to believe. Because in a small town like that I imagine most ponies would notice it. Though upon re-reading it seems that she was moved away from Ponyville. But you never explicitly say that so I made the assumption that it was an orphanage in ponyville.
4. I find it really hard to believe that she wouldn't recognize Trixie. Because unless this is ignoring the Alicorn Amulet incident, I doubt anyone that was in Ponyville could ever forget what she looked like.
5. You seem to have made it farther into the future but have made very little indication as to just HOW far into the future it is.
6. You seem to be a bit heavy on the "Sad". Give a little break in the sad (such as the recent chapter) Because otherwise it gets tedious.
Other than that, I'll keep an eye on it. Keep it up.
Yeah, I'd like to know that myself, along with how Scootaloo managed to live in Ponyville, and keep this a secret in this particular story. But I'm sure you'll get to that eventually.
4526779 Yeah that will be planned out in a future chapter.
It's something I had planned, but didn't mention.
It will be a series called Flashback. Such as Flashback: Part 1, Part 2.
And it will have events that lead up to how she got to ponyville and managed to stay there and such.
Re-reading this, and Diamonds. I'm glad that you're back, this and the "Even Diamonds Can Be Broken" fic are nice fics.
D'awww! I'm liking how this is playing out now that you have best filly with Trixie.
Yay! You're back! I was wondering when this and Diamonds were going to be updated. I really like this story and Diamonds.
Ah! The end to this chapter was really cute. I couldn't stop the smile that spread across my face. I'm excited to see where you take this.
4528637 Funny thing is Scootaloo and Trixie are two of my top 5 favorite ponies.
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They're part of my top 5 as well. Although I have several ponies tied for number one.
Wait this fic is not dead?
yyyyeeeesss!
4565254 still not dead. ^_^
oh well first dislike.
Wrong you're
D'awww !
poor scootsy getting abused like that