Celestia and Luna were not the original rulers of Equestria. What does this mean for Twilight? Explore the past and future of Equestria through the changes Twilight will experience.
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I don't often review, but I really like this so far! Track and Email
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You realize, of course, the best way for Twilight's wings to come in would be via wingboner. Wouldn't that be hilarious to put down in whatever journal of the process Twilight will keep? "Acquired wings due to Rainbow Dash's amazing flank. Disgraced and ashamed."
Just noticed I contradicted myself with the seating arrangement in the dining hall.
Fixed it.
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Kinda disgusting, but funny. Doubt it would go in a journal of the process, more likely Twilight's private diary.
Princess Celestia seems awfully accepting of this, and Twilight even eager, wouldn't Twilight generally be a bit more concerned and Celestia a little more interesting in undoing whatever happened, if possible?
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>Princess Celestia seems awfully accepting of this, and Twilight even eager, wouldn't Twilight generally be a bit more concerned and Celestia a little more interesting in undoing whatever happened, if possible?
That's the 'standard' response in many fics, but really... Why?
Twi gets more magic and the ability to fly. Sounds like a good deal to me! Yeah, there's going to be complications... she'll be a celebrity, etc. On the other hand, she's already the most powerful unicorn in Equestria, as well as the personal student of the princess.
Half of Equestria is probably expecting Twilight to become an alicorn at some time.
As for Celestia... Her most trusted and beloved student gets more power? That's not a bad thing. It makes protecting Equestria easier, and offers opporunities for the future. Celestia could even take a day off, etc...
Also remember- in this story Twilight is becoming an Alicorn via the same process as the princesses. Celestia even says she should have expected it.
In that context, it is a 'normal' process which has happened before, and has been shown to have positive effects. Rare, but known. No reason for panic.
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Wow, what number am I thinking of now? Really you gave my response before I had a chance to read the question.
Just the one grammar error I found:
How long it will take for her to fully mature waits to be seen.
should be
How long it will take for her to fully mature remains to be seen.
Perfect otherwise, and alicornization fics have always interested me. Keep up the good work.
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Got it
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While I don't subscribe to the term or the sexual association, a sudden pomf in public would certainly make an excellent climactic cliffhanger.
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I have to agree that many Alicorn Twilight fics tend to be a little artificial in that regard, but of course one has to understand that that is the necessary source of drama in those fics. We haven't seen any sign of where this one is headed yet, but from everyone's acceptance and Celestia and Rosy Dawn's behavior, it sounds like it's going to come from outside—possibly the other nobility—which is of course a completely different kind of story.
Anyway, thumbs up for "Haha no, you can do whatever you want." from Celestia, even if it's not actually true in practice since she's indefinitely detailed while she develops. Of course, she may just pop out in the middle of the ceremony, so that may not even be an issue!
I really like this take on Twilight becomes an alicorn. It feels more episodic and in keeping with the overall positive attitude of the show. In the majority of other fics, Twilight is usually manic, in denial, or views it as a curse. It would be a refreshing change of pace if you maintained the atmosphere you've developed.
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I would like to maintain the atmosphere in this story, especially if it is in keeping with the show. The only thing that might stuff that up is my tendency to write what I think feels more natural, hence the doctors interrupting the story instead of conveniently coming in before the story begins or immediately following the story. I'll do my best.
I can't help but imagine Twilight's tiny wings flapping as hard as they possibly can and accomplishing nothing.
biddilybiddilybiddilybiddilybiddilybiddilybiddilybiddilybiddilybiddilybiddily
"One of the sandwiches hovered up before her mouth and she took a bite. Daffodils and daisies..." Daffodils are poisonous. You just killed Twilight Sparkle, you monster.
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, when Twilight ordered a daffodil and daisy sandwich for lunch in The Ticket Master. 
I didn't, the original writers did
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But you killed her again. How long must she suffer under your hate?
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Can you do that? Can you be poisoned to death twice?
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Of course you can be poisoned to death twice. Why do you think we have double jeopardy?
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Fair enough. However, is it hate? Or do I love her character so much that I will indulge in even the most self destructive canonical personal quirks?
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So you're saying you enable destructive behavior. How can you live with yourself?
I was going to follow this anyways for Alicorn Twilight. Alicorn Twilight, plus Twilestia? Awesome. And miniature wings Alicorn Twilight is just an adorable mental image.
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I must admit, the image of the mini wings didn't cross my mind until well after I posted the story. It was only then that I realized their potential for cute. Hmm, maybe I could check into that when I start looking for cover artwork...
Speaking of tiny wings, Scootaloo really needs to turn up to counsel Twilight on the shame of being aeronautically underendowed. And then throw a tantrum when Twilight sneezes and accidentally grows them another foot.
271212 I am tempted to turn this into a fic...
Hah! This is absolutely wonderful, I love it!
The only thing that comes to mind is that instead of "Ascension," I think "Apotheosis" would be a better word. Or actually, I suppose it's just my favorite word so I try to shoehorn it in anywhere it seems appropriate :D Nice work.
Hahahaha, man this is amazing!
This story is a wonderful read! I love Alicorn Twilight, I love Twilestia, I love friendshipping, jeez it's all fabulous. I do hope it winds up going the Twilestia route, the pairing is just so lovely.
I'm definitely tracking this, and I eagerly await the next installment!
Ooooh wow, one of my favourite stories by far.
You can never have to much Twilestia.
Loving this story.
Also... need update nao!
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'I knew I'm awesome, but i never imagined I'm so cool i can give a Wingboner to a Unicorn.'
i can imagine RD's response to this.
Twilestia is bestia,
Uh... Or something akin to that.
I say yes please. I'm already enjoying this fic's deviation from the standard "*poof* Twilight is now an Alicorn, congrats, now she must mope for all the next forty chapters, until the writer writes him/herself into a corner and gives up". Adding a romance to it would be grand, and I have no doubt you can handle it.
So keep up the good work!
Before I go on to the next chapter... thanks for the shameless plug on FFN. Next, the Abbott and Costello joke, not quite "Who's On First" more like "Thanks? No Tanks!". A more interesting start to a Alicorn Twilight, a gradual change is certainly new, along with Discord making the Elements (gives me a another reason why he is on my list). I will certainly have to keep reading and watch this.
In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,
Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon
Great chapter, nice to see more Celestia/Twilight bonding... makes me wonder about their future relationship... will it remain Teacher/Student, good friends, or something more. And good job on the expansion of the past and on the Elements. I am so tracking this.
Celestia's Paladin
458725 Thanks, I'm working on the next chapter right now. I'm taking it a little more slowly with this work than my work at FFN right now, but I am still writing. I was a little worried at first putting my idea on the past of the elements on paper. I thought it was a good idea, but there are many times when I read a fic that is dealing with the past and just end up rolling my eyes at the cheese-factor present(to be honest I rolled my eyes when I read over my first chapter here before posting here as well).
After rereading he second chapter... yeah I think I underestimated the Twilestianess just a tad.
You are a brilliant writer. Can't wait to read the next chapters. Thanks for uploading these.
Any idea when the next chapter will be out?
582439 It shouldn't be too much longer, I've been just a little sidetracked here. Trying to teach first year Japanese high school kids the importance of power writing, but I have to do it in English, which just makes it more difficult(it's important that they learn, because reading and writing portions of the English section of college entrance exams often use power writing, and they are normally woefully uninformed, as in even the English teachers here didn't even know about it).
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png This needs an update
This needs Twilunestia!
and considering luna already liked what she saw and joked about it
I actually see luna slowly being involved into their silly playstyle which bonds them 3 all together
Btw any ETA on the next chapter?
I'ts been a while since you responded:0
Any idea when the next chapter will be out?
Hmmmm shining armor is tardy to the party. Good chapter.
Just noticed was featured, didn't expect that
. My story looks so lonely without cover art
. Any suggestions out there?
997198 Thanks for that. It's a little disconcerting that a mistake like that managed to slip under the radar. I like to go over a paragraph after it is written to make sure that I had not repeated any adjectives or phrases to keep from keeping on keep repeating
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Fixed it, BTW.
This story is great ^^
thank you for your hard work
Yay!
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79 likes. no dislikes. fucking wow.
I can feel the twilestia coming on...
I like the pet filly name "shiny ammo" for when twilight was young.
Really good so far.... So that means MORE
D'aaaw with a hint of Twilestia. Yum!