So this just happened. Where do I go from here?

But in all honesty, I'm actually quite proud of this story. Not only is it about my OTP, I also think it's written quite well. Of course, that could just be my ego talking, so I implore you to critique this the best you can. Thank you!

-TwinkieSpy

Sounds great. Sex ok I guess not a big fan of pony on pony. I'll still read though.

"I can't wait to see the look on Twilight's face!"

^this, SO MUCH this.

it's awesome.

I never thought I'd see PinkiexPinkie. That's... That's a new one. And now to read.

Edit: Well that was good. In a really strange way. As for where to go with it, well... "I can't wait to see the look on Twilight's face!" might be somewhere interesting to take this.

Grrrr my comment didn't post. Any way I said its a great story and I'm glad you stayed away from the clopfic. You should continue with this and show how the relation ship gos. As long as it stays away from being a clopfic. Great story though.

Diykutcucugccucddxaeessdmbhb.

God help us all.

Wow... that's... original (and good).

Would've loved to see this continued, but a one shot is still good

I welcome our new doppelganger overlords. Please, grace my eyeballs with more of this.

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Well, I wrote a oneshot with the same pairing awhile back, but at the moment I desperately need to update my chaptered stories.

If Pinkie was my overlord life would be awesome.

Reminds me when I wrote Sp/it. Similar concept but with both Pinkie Pies teaming up on Dash. Good job on it mate. Can't wait to see more?

So good and I am not into clop or the like.

I just don't know what to say only if you write more I will read

Good God, this is great! I almost didn't read for trepidation of the dreaded sex tag, but I'm pleased as punch to say I thought the scene was tastefully done, if a bit abrupt.

The whole concept is so deliciously bizzare, and their relationship is oh so sweet regardless. I can't get enough.

Noticed a typo, a "that that" where "than that" was meant.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

I don't normally go for clopfics unless there's sufficient praise for the non-graphic parts of them. Basically, I'm reading because I want a story to entertain me, and paragraphs of nothing but sex don't make a good fanfic. But this was one hell of a premise and one hell of a story, and I didn't even realize there was anything graphic in it until I saw the Mature rating and the comments beforehand, so that's another excellent sign. The thumb-up and favorite are well-earned.

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Whoops, thanks for the correction.

>>328426328426

More than happy to help.

Beautiful. I pretty much skimmed over the sex scene. The exploration of Pinkie's mind was a lot more interesting. This is a beautiful crack pairing and a very sweet portrayal thereof. Excellent work.

This story gave me so many feels. You have no idea... I loved it so much

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> So this just happened.

That was my reaction.

I had to laugh at the sex, but the whole setup was great. I honestly would love to see a sequel to this.

That was actually really cute. I demand moar

The sex was rushed. The way you wrote it, Pinkamena climaxed in a minute.

Other than that, very well done. 3/5.

if seen pinkie x pinkie, pinkie x bubbles, but pinkie x pinkamine i could not find and yet here it is now the next for me to find is a pinkamina x pinkamina

I'd always taken a strange liking to Pinkie X Pinkamena, I considered writing some just because I'd never seen it before. This was well written, kudos!

Now I would like to see where this concept could go when pinkamena starts her new life.

As when I read your other PinkieXPinkamena story, I am just stricken with how sweet it is, it's dysfunctional, in a way, but oh so romantic!

It's a very feel-good story, the sex-scene was uncomplicated and calm, it didn't break the flow or suddenly go into unexplained details.

I wouldn't call it cloppy, but I would call it sweet. Good job! Yet again you made me like the idea of Pinkie x Pinkamena so very much.

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Image: http://images.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw1791-1322427921.png

I would honestly love to see this continued, it certainly stands up on its own, but there is A LOT you could do with this set up.

yay

Oh god what have you done?!

TWO PINKIES?!

Erm...maybe not really. One is more or less normal if a bit depressed, and the other one is well...

Pinkie.

I liked it, but the scene could have been longer and more descriptive.

I DEMAND MORE!! This totally needs a sequal about how ponyville will react to two, yet so different Pinkies and their relationship!

Mother oh god she's real...

Image: http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/300W/i/2011/352/a/b/brief_analysis_of_pinkamena_personalities_by_scorchedwing-d4jfm3w.jpg

...I am now a big Pinkie x Pinkamena fan. Dammit. o_o Nice story XD

DANG IT! I'm so conflicted!  I don't like most stories with sex in it, but this was good... Not because of what it had in it, but because of how it was... Curse u!!!

This story gives a whole new meaning to the phrase "go buck yourself", doesn't it?

Love it!

Keep up the good work!

As both a man who studies psychology and a man who suffers psychology I love stories like this, now I have discovered one in which Pinkie and Pinkamena get along, it wasn't too bad either... sometimes I wish the voices in my head were a bit more like that... lol... anyway thanks for the wicked read, you could make more of this story you know... I would make it an order but... I'M IN NO MILITARY

So 10/10 for the idea. (Which I loved by the way)

9/10 for the story. (Which I also loved!)

And 7/10 for the clop. (Because I feel it deserved more clop!!!)