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Misuse of furniture... finally, someone catering to my kink.
Using a chair as a stepladder. Using a coffee table as a footstool. Sleeping on a table.
Oh the possibilities are endless. I look forward to reading this one.

What if they were bucking in front of the Crystal Heart?

nice butt, Cadance.

Oh yeah nice story, too.

I was seriously staring at Cadance's ass for three minutes

(WARNING: This story is intended for mature audiences only! It contains graphic depictions of strong sexual content, along with oral sex, wingplay, playful teasing, untimely interruptions, and improper use of a desk! You have been warned!)

untimely interruptions

You unimaginable bastard D:<

I say this again: Shining Armor is one lucky son of a bitch.

3220494 I know right? It's glorious!

what can I say, lucky bastard, with I had somepony to help me with my paparwork

You, my friend must write more:derpytongue2:

Sergeant Sprinkles, eh? I see what you did there. :ajsmug:

SHL

Hell yeah! This was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Epic! You're good, one, veeeery good :pinkiehappy:

Gimme a Hell yeah if you want sequel!!!

:twilightblush: :twilightblush: :twilightblush:

You can have those.

You can also have these:

:pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

This was awesome. And, just saying, but I totally called that Celestia would be the third interruption. Seriously.:rainbowdetermined2:

I'll admit, it's a shame most of the Shining Cadence fics on this site are all clop, but quite a few of them aren't half bad.

...This one, however, was frikkin' hot as hell and just spectacular. :moustache: Good on ya, mate.

Read this over a Skype call...everyone agreed that it was f**king hawt :ajsmug:

why use a word like coquettishly? most people have never even heard that word before. I did not. would it not have been just as easy to use coyly or some other more well known word?
^this question does not have anything to do with what I think over all with the story. But I am posting this before I forget.

"I’m quite certain Cadence will take excellent care of you,"
Man if I was him in that spot and Celestia said something like that, I would have lost my shit right there and then. Literally would have laughed uproariously, followed by a snarky comment about how she has no idea.

Also I Loved the part about Celestia's knowing smile. Man I love her and to see her being portrayed as a trickster as opposed to a troller is just great.
Thumbs up, faved, watched. You are awesome. :duck:

Yeah, that was probably just a little bit hot.

I don't normally read clop, but this is really good!! :yay:

3219039 dude, there have been some shifts at my work that would drive you crazy, tables as beds, chairs as tables, stacked folded chairs as footrests and so on. You'd go home most nights wishing for an infomercial on 3 in 1 furniture just to finish yourself off.

i dont normally read clop, but damn i could feel his frustration evertime he got interrupted. nice way to write too, very..."intricate". The only mall thing i didnt like, and i do mean very small, was the use of the word contort. its never been a word id relate to a sexy face, more like a strange, possibly disfigured expression. maybe its just me, but that was it. Everything else was excellent.

I don't always read clop, but when I do, it's damn fine clop. Stay "horn"y my friends.

A few typos, otherwise a lovely and well paced read. 9.2/10.

Very nice job, well written and very hot, great job

Celestia: Have fun you 2.

Me: 0_o Holy Shit! XD

3263231 Princess Trollestia strikes again!....Or potentially Molestia....Hunh,All a matter of perspective i guess

Soo-wee! Good show, I say, good show. This is certainly a very good piece of work. Great job!

3223218 you get a profile pic approval!

Very good clop with a lot of "d'awww" moments. Favorited for sure!

*Reads warning* eh, i'm sure it can't be that b- GOOD GOD MAN! YOU ARE NOT MEANT TO USE A DESK LIKE THAT! :pinkiegasp:
nah but in all seriousness awesome fic, had a right giggle fit when Celestia said “Have fun you two.” i knew she was gonna say something like that but it was still hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

God, this was simply masterful. Loved the dynamic, loved how there was an actual sense of care and love between them, and I loved all the funny interactions with the interruptions. And I'll admit, it was pretty damn hot.

Shining, you lucky son of a bitch. Marriage doesn't typically involve tons and tons of sex!

Also, with Celestia's last line, I knew exactly what was gonna happen. You stuck to the cartoony expressions of the show, and certainly expressed Cadence's shock with it. Fucking brilliant, nearly made me burst out laughing. I actually had to do a double take because I missed a line or two!

This is a really decent ShiningCadence one-shot clopfic. Shining Armor is a lucky son of a bitch! :twilightsheepish:

3219647 I'm pretty sure all of Equestria would implode. It is powered by love and compassion after all...

“Have fun you two.”

I fuckin lost it right there! :rainbowlaugh:
Seriously! I was taking a drink of coffee, and sprayed it across the fuckin room! :rainbowlaugh:

Cute and sexy at the same time. Someone's gonna have to ask Celestia how she does that. :trollestia:

There is no improper use of a desk. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::facehoof::facehoof:

“I’m sorry, did I catch you off guard?” she asked coquettishly.

This... is an absolutely terrible pun.

Off guard, really?
Really?
REALLY, COME ON NOW I THOUGHT YOU WERE ABOVE THIS DAMNIT.

/rant

Okay this is pretty good for a lemon fanfic, just the constant interruptions had me dying. Plus this fanfic sort of hits on a personal level when parents and family members love to bother you at the wrong time when you're having your "moments".

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