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Your Antagonist


Shut up. Just write.

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When Sir Spike the Fireheart is framed by a fellow knight and branded a traitor to the Kingdom of Equestria for crimes he did not commit, he escapes persecution and makes a new life in the Everfree forest with a thief by the name of Pipsqueak. All the while, the seeds of vengeance slowly begin to bloom, and with the help of a strange cast of allies, he seeks to right the wrongs done unto his name. Cover Art belongs to: John Joseco. If asked by the artist, I will remove it.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 19 )

One of the best i've read in a long time:moustache:
Looking foward to this one

well hory fakin shee. I love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. GODDAMIT WRITE MORE!:flutterrage:

this looks very good, well written, good story line, comedy mixed in...
tracking

when is the next chapter!!!
I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

I'll start the slow clap
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this fic just gets better, i love the characters and the style you've done this in.

this is a great story. and i cant wait to read the rest. maybe your experience in the army would spark ideas for future chapters.
but i :moustache: you a question. whats with the long chapter names? not that they aren't funny but im just curious.

410779 2 things, I've been enlisted for about two years, I'm just going to the Philippines on a training mission. And the chapter titles... well it's more animeish for me in that respect. What I'm going for with this fic is like a written cross between anime and American style comics.

411519 Huh, i was reading and that style too. Anyway, I've really enjoyed this chapter, can't wait till you come back from your training

Cant wait for the next chapter dude, and good luck on your training mission. Godspeed and Urah!

As Pinkie’s tongue passed along the weapon, the lollipop began to grow in length,

Mah D!:derpyderp1:

I just wanted to say that I've really enjoyed this fic so far. Both the story and action is well written and I like the unique weapon you gave Spike. Its hard to tell if you plan on continuing this or not but one can hope. Anyway great work and good luck in your career.

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