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Yosh-E-O


I am aspiring author who enjoys writing various works of fantasy in which have a cutesy touch

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The series revolves around the concept of how Princess Celestia raised Spike prior to Twilight Sparkle graduating "The School for Gifted Unicorns". However, she is not the only gifted unicorn to be given a dragon assistant.

Celestia's chosen follows the path of Spike, Yosh, Tacki, and Torth, along with their pony friends, as they play their respective parts in making Equestria an even more amazing place.

Cuteness, comedy, and a detailed plot make this series a delight to read as journeys beyond Equestria are explored while Spike and Twilight work on learning the magic of friendship.

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Comments ( 7 )

That was nice little story.
You made some spelling mistakes, but that's OK I didn't see too many.

Well good luck and best wish in the future.

Thank you for your honesty. I can miss a word, or two, from time-to-time. Though, it is being aware of such mistakes that help me be a better writer.

I have "3" more parts to this to upload. Plus, as I get more inspiration, I am going to add to it until I can add to it no more.

Should you be interested in how the story evolves, please stay tuned. Otherwise, thanks for your time and stay pony, my friend. :)

You made a sequel, and another one for a set if stories that seemingly no one likes. in total, you written over 11.000 words, and I can make a wild guess I can do only two-thousand words and it be liked. It's not hard. If I may make a suggestion? No diapers. You're wholesomely disrespecting Spike's potential by giving him the image of a child.

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Thanks kindly for the suggestion. Though this sort of work is my schtick. It may not be liked as a whole but there is an audience for it to whom do appreciate what I've presented through the various tales I've woven for Spike. :duck:

Interestingly enough I've written a few stories here in which are diaper free that are also less liked than liked. :facehoof: Though it is for those who do like them in which I bother to post them here. :scootangel: I may never be recognized as a FiM Author but I am happy to at least appease the audience I can.

Overall I'm really here to write, experiment, and have fun. Feedback like yours confirms more on how I'm far from the most beloved author here. But that's okay. So long as I know one person likes an idea I presented I am satisfied for it is one person beyond myself who appreciated the material. :unsuresweetie:

Author's note for this chapter looks like it should go at the start, not the end. Their is a drop-down box or something to select that.

Gonna have to get around to read this!

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