Ponies start disappearing, businesses are destroyed, and a group calling themselves "The Architects" are claiming responsibility. The Equestrian Guard has no leads, no suspects, and no idea what to do. The Princesses turn to a special section of the Equestrian Security Agency: Third Echelon. Officially, they do not exist, all their operatives are disavowed, and all their actions condemned. They have access to a tool trusted to no one else: the Fifth Freedom, the authority to uphold the law by breaking it, to protect information by stealing it, to save lives by taking them.
I liked it, built up a nice cliffhanger, kept interest and was paced well.
So, ya... more.
You should have written this with a word processor. It would have caught a few of the small errors.
The story slipped into present tense a few times. You may want to be on the lookout for that.
I don't know anything about Splinter Cell, but the story has me interested. Have a favorite.
3499323 Not sure about the novelizations, but the games are certainly worth a spin. Most of the older ones were selling for less than 10 US dollars last time I checked, and they get even cheaper in packs.
Recommended.
Use a word processor. That would catch your punctuation errors.
Two year checkup. Will there be more of this?
6791083 Hot damn, its been 2 years already? I keep telling my self I'll write more and then I don't. I still want to write more, but then I don't. I can't promise anything with my current record but I still want to keep going.