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"Thats right, ignore the rules of physics and jump twice!" - King Oberon

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That is a funny ending. i can almost hear him screaming in agony from the pain.

Flutterbutter Estacado. Ruthless animal lover and italian-equestria gnagster-veterenarian.

MIKE PATTON IS

THE KINDNESS

3190949 The final bit of the game is spent getting the birthday cake for Jenny.

"thE VANILLA OOOOONNEeee. FOR JENNY."

when is the new chapter coming out?

3214596 "Give it a day. If it's not done in the next 4 hours it will be done by this time tomorrow"- Captain Princess, My Editor. :pinkiesmile:

AN HOUR AND 8 MINUTES BEHIND SCHEDULE.

IM SO SORRY

Keep it up friend, this story can go places.

3271626 Just as soon as I
1: Figure out what the FUCK I'm doing
2: Work out some plot-holes with someone who has actually read the comics
3: Asked my editor PWEEAAAAAAASE! until his ears fall off.
4: Eat food to keep myself from dying, so that I may write this shit
5: Farvi usare google per capire cosa ho digitato
6: Go over it once more AND THEN IT WILL BE POSTED.

HEY READER

FIND MY PUN

HEHEHEHAEHAEHAEHAEHAEHAE

Great chapter as usual, and quick question will Fluttershy have all the powers of both games, one of the games or will they be totally different from the games.

Only if you can answer it of course.

3566175 1.Yes, 2.no that would be boring, 3.Maybe depending on what I can come up with/make sound plausible/make funny.

A black tendril shot out towards Angel and wrapped itself around his mouth. Before Fluttershy had a chance to scream, Another one wrapped itself around her mouth, effectively gagging her.

Hands out of your pants. Now.

.... Fine. *takes hand out of pants* ....Happy now? :trixieshiftleft:

3567598 Keep them above the belt :unsuresweetie:

3566183 Well the darkness guns are definitely out of the question. Equestria doesn't even have flintlock pistols or muskets yet, plus... no fingers for the triggers.

Well it could be possible, the darkness could form pistols and if I read it right the darkness can shape shift into different forms and probably make Fluttershy into a human, anthro, or something else depending on how you think about it.

Also quick question will the darkness affect her stare as well.

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and probably make Fluttershy into a human, anthro, or something else depending on how you think about it.

NOPE NO NOOOOOOOPE NUH UH 'OPPOSITE OF YES' NIET NEIN

will the darkness affect her stare as well.

I don't know, Maybe, I aint tellin you guyz alla dis shit, iz gotta be a suprise

once you all pull your heads out of the gutter we can continue with the story. I can wait.

... My only immediate thoughts were "Cupcakes" and "Double Rainboom", so I don't know what gutter you think my mind is in.
And then TundraStanza realized the joke you were telling.
... Oh. :ajsleepy:

I wouldn't be so sure that it was a tongue...

I think Twilight could get around the hearts problem, using her powers to copy Sombra's magic and supercharge Darkness with it... The problem is, wouldn't Darkness switching hosts kill Fluttershy?

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Whoops, Forgot the gore tag there. Thank you for reminding me.

And as to the host thing, That'd just be too easy for Ol' Darkbutt now wouldn't it?

As a fellow Darkness fan that was about to do a Darkness in Equestria story myself, a friend of mine came across this and showed it to me. After reading the first chapter... I think your idea is better. However, You should probably consider doing a little bit of editing. I've only read the first chapter, but there are some spelling and grammar issues here and there (not enough to be too distracting, but can still be a bit of a sore for the more picky readers, like myself), and you seem to have a habit of having two different speakers appear in the same paragraph, which (as far as I've been taught) is a literary no-no.

None the less, I do like this, and I would love to see it improved and expanded on.

so far so good... though, the Mike Patton joke was a bit... off. Might i suggest you edit that out?

4172351 Excuse me while I yell at my current Editor/Kinda-Co-Author/PrettyCoolGuy

After that, I shall get the only other person willing to put up with my literary shit a real editor

4172367 You might suggest that.
But considering I'm the one who slipped that one in there, it's not going anywhere c:

This hiatus is gonna last about 20 days minimum.

Cuz dats when school gets out.

yaaaaaaaaaaay~

dafuq with all the chaos princes from warhammer 40k

the only problem I have with this story is that eventually I'll finish it.

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This hiatus is gonna last about 20 days minimum.

144 weeks and 4 days later.

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