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Canine 224453

Joined February 2012
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    Canine's Stories (2)

    • A Whole New World
      A human named Dutch finds himself in a mysterious forest. Will his life turn for better or worse?

      190,694 words · 6,147 views · 582 likes · 34 dislikes
    • Sacrifice
      Twilight has been given the rarest of opportunities, but is it worth leaving everything else behind?
      3,837 words · 466 views · 43 likes · 6 dislikes
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    Dutch smiled to himself as he looked at the scene. Pinkie Pie certainly didn't disappoint with this party. It was held over the entire town, and everypony in Ponyville was invited. They all crowded in the main square, eager to see the return of their princesses.

    They arrived on a large golden chariot. Celestia was sat in the middle, with Luna next to her. Luna had been nervous throughout the entire flight over. She wasn't sure how everypony would react. She had been Nightmare Moon not 24 hours ago. She got down from the carriage, and almost immediately, two fillies placed a flower chain around her neck. She smiled as she looked up at her sister, tears of joy in her eyes.

    Meanwhile, Twilight Sparkle couldn't help but feel a pang of guilt. She looked over at her six new friends, and knew that she would have to leave them again soon. Celestia noticed this, and while the crowd was talking to Luna, she walked over to Twilight.

    "Why the long face Twilight?" The unicorn looked up at her mentor, "Your duties in Ponyville are finished, and you can now return to your studies in Canterlot."

    "That's what's bothering me though," she said, "I've made my first true friends today, the only friends I've ever had, but now I have to leave them." She looked back at them. The five ponies, each with their own personality, and the human, truly unique, and yet, still accepted as one of them.

    Celestia thought for a second, then turned to Spike, who was standing with the group, "Spike, take a letter."

    Spike brought out a quill and scroll and began writing what the princess said, "I, Princess Celestia of Equestria, hereby declare the unicorn, Twilight Sparkle, to be a permanent resident in Ponyville." Twilight's face lit up with glee, but Celestia wasn't finished, "She is to continue studying the magic of friendship, and report her findings to me. I wish her the best of luck in her new home."

    An almighty cheer came from the group as the ponies ran over and hugged Twilight. Then Dutch came up and wrapped his arms around all six of them. Celestia allowed herself a small giggle at the sight. She knew that this would be the beginning of something great.

    Meanwhile, unknown to Dutch, something began to grow inside him. A spark. It had ignited when he had first arrived in Equestria, but it had been weak, like a dying ember. When he had used the Elements of Harmony, however, the spark had been strengthened, and it continued to burn in his very soul. In time, it would reveal itself to him, but for now, it let him enjoy the moment.

    Comments ( 7 )

    #1 · 58w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #2 · 58w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I get a warm fuzzy feeling from reading this.  Also, nice touch with the Element of Bravery. Most stories I have read so far seem to have the human on the sidelines.  Well done!

    #3 · 58w, 3d ago · · ·
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    oh YEAH!:rainbowdetermined2:

    Axz
    #4 · 58w, 3d ago · · ·
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    nice chapter, your alternative story work realy good so here have a few pinkies:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    the last paragraph goth my attentions tho, Dutch´s getting OP powers... man this is gone be interesting indeed:twilightsmile:, the question is what kind of OP powers will it be..

    #5 · 52w, 13h ago · · ·
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    >>404093 WTF is with that picture

    #6 · 28w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>617634 Everything is with that picture. :trollestia:

    #7 · 13w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy:Okay, now I am definitely sticking around for this.:pinkiehappy:

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