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Fun Bus to Manehattan by RagingSemi Report

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#1 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 6 days ago  
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What is with all these stories about ponies and mating season?????????????????? :twilightoops:
#2 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 6 days ago  
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At first I was like :facehoof:
But then...:rainbowlaugh:
#3 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 6 days ago  
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Nice, short, sweet, and simple.  "The main cast gets laid... Nuff said."  :rainbowlaugh: :twilightblush: :raritystarry: :pinkiehappy: :fluttershysad: :ajsmug:      
So planned by celestia :trollestia: "Trolololol"
#4 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>10690
Have my babies......

......NOW!!!:flutterrage:
#5 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 6 days ago  
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This increasing influx of clopfics is...troubling.
#6 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>10695

Ok :rainbowhuh:
YAY! :yay:
#7 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 6 days ago  
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lol
#8 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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>>10703
I concur. :trixieshiftleft:
wobblert (guest)
#9 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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hahahahahahaha ah i remember this story very well, especially rainbow and raritys part, loved it
Wobbuffet (guest)
#10 Chapter 1  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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Ehhhhhhh... This sounds like a continuation of Rutting Day...
Really. The whole "Rutting" thing and the whole Orgy idea and the mentioning of Geldings (Mr. Breezy)... Yeah. And Rutting Day was probably your weakest clopfic.

Honestly... Somehow I think if this is what you're putting out now I think you may be slipping.

Maybe go back to your humanized stories? You know, the ones with Celestia and Luna and having fun inviting Twilight and her friends for some "fun" in the castle? Those were pretty good. I'd like to see those continue. But this stuff is... neh.
#11 Chapter 2  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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I see what you did there. :pinkiehappy:
#12 Chapter 2  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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What you did there, i saw it.:ajsmug:
#13 Chapter 2  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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>>10703
>>10793

Oh no!  There's an increase in material I find questionable on a site that allows me to stop said material from appearing!  Whatever shall I do?!

:ajbemused:

People write things.  No-one's forcing you to read them, or comment on them.
#14 Chapter 2  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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>>11015 I understand people write things, I do not mind the occasional clopfic, but there seems to be an abnormally large influx of them pretty recently, which I find, pretty weird.

Also, Kudos on your profile pic of Sgt. Foley. :derpytongue2:
Anonymous (guest)
#15 Chapter 2  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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>>11020 Well, that's because RagingSemi is apparently systematically uploading all his stories here (and he has a LOT of stories).
#16 Chapter 2  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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lol love it
#17 Chapter 2  Posted 31 weeks, 5 days ago  
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:twilightoops:
Not sure if I like where this is going....
#18 Chapter 2  Posted 31 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Dusk? OH FUCK! :twilightoops:
#19 Chapter 3  Posted 31 weeks, 4 days ago  
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“No, but I’ll suck on your wiener.  Wanna fuck me?”

“Lady!  I don’t run that kind of business!” :rainbowlaugh:

When men want sex, they ask YOU!
Closet Brony (guest)
#20 Chapter 3  Posted 31 weeks, 4 days ago  
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You would think Pinkie Pie's senses would prevent her from falling for jail bait lol
#21 Chapter 3  Posted 31 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Hey, I remember this story from PFA. It's a delight. Glad to see you've seperated it into chapters, as well, it was rather long!

>>10703
It's mainly RagingSemi that's doing it, uploading all his old stuff. Don't like it? Uncheck the Mature check mark!
Gypsy (guest)
#22 Chapter 3  Posted 31 weeks, 4 days ago  
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already read the full story, Pinkie Pie & Rarity were the shittiest ive ever read, only one that was great was Twilights
#23 Chapter 3  Posted 31 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Still my favorite clopfic.
#24 Chapter 3  Posted 31 weeks, 4 days ago  
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lol
#25 Chapter 3  Posted 31 weeks, 4 days ago  
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"rapist or axe murderer or investment banker."

You sir, have made my day.
#26 Chapter 3  Posted 31 weeks, 3 days ago  
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>>11001
i meant the funny references, i wasn't complaining
#27 Chapter 4  Posted 31 weeks, 3 days ago  
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Wait, is this what I think it is?:derpyderp2:
#28 Chapter 4  Posted 31 weeks, 3 days ago  
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Haha this shit is so fucked up





What am I even doing
#29 Chapter 4  Posted 31 weeks, 3 days ago  
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DON'T YOU EVENTHINK ABOUT TAKING AWAY MY FLUTTERSHY'S INNOCENCE!!!!!  :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Other than that, god job so far. :pinkiecrazy:
#30 Chapter 4  Posted 31 weeks, 2 days ago  
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:pinkiehappy: MOREZ
#31 Chapter 5  Posted 31 weeks, 2 days ago  
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"I'm the motherfucking Batman"
#32 Chapter 5  Posted 31 weeks, 2 days ago  
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HE is the fifth horseman of the apocolypse. :pinkiecrazy:
#33 Chapter 5  Posted 31 weeks, 2 days ago  
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>>12100
I was thinking the exact same thing. :rainbowlaugh:
#34 Chapter 6  Posted 31 weeks, 1 day ago  
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:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
#35 Chapter 2  Posted 31 weeks, 1 day ago  
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Wait, Dusk? I SEE WHAT IS GOING ON

notsureifwant.jpg
#36 Chapter 3  Posted 31 weeks, 1 day ago  
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well

dodging cars at break neck speeds sounds pretty pinkie

but really?

in pony world, girl asks guy to fuck!
#37 Chapter 4  Posted 31 weeks, 1 day ago  
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do not make applejack fuck her uncle

please

oh please

unless she just called him uncle because they know each other

but seriously

no relative fucking
#38 Chapter 5  Posted 31 weeks, 1 day ago  
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He can beat those criminals up even if they weren't criminals

He's fucking Batman. He doesn't need a reason to beat someone senseless.
#39 Chapter 6  Posted 31 weeks, 1 day ago  
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At first I thought that strange guy was Slendermane
#40 Chapter 6  Posted 31 weeks, 21 hours ago  
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Zebra should have been all stereotypical black guy calling a stereotypical white chick 'racist' and 'racial profiling' (blame "The Boondocks")
Batcolt (guest)
#41 Chapter 5  Posted 31 weeks, 10 hours ago  
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"Who are you?":rainbowhuh:
"...Im Batcolt" Duh-nuh-nuh-nuh-nuh-nuh-nuh-nuh-duh-nuh-nuh-nuh-nuh-nuh-nhu-nuh-bum-bum BATCOLT!
#42 Chapter 7  Posted 31 weeks, 5 hours ago  
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twenty bucks says Clip is gay:heart:
#43 Chapter 7  Posted 31 weeks, 5 hours ago  
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@Blue

I'm putting another 20 on that
#44 Chapter 7  Posted 31 weeks, 5 hours ago  
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>>12914
...I dunno. Hard to tell. 20 bits says Rarity gets him.
#45 Chapter 7  Posted 31 weeks, 2 hours ago  
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25 says he's gay, but Rarity converts him. :trollestia:
#46 Chapter 7  Posted 30 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>12997
Raise to 50.:trixieshiftright:
Guest (guest)
#47 Chapter 7  Posted 30 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>10659 I don't know but this story is just funny... I don't care if it's a clopfic, it's more like a freaking sitcom like the episode of Seinfeld when the group had a masturbation contest. Elan: "But it has no personality!"
#48 Chapter 7  Posted 30 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>13101

75 hes gay!
#49 Chapter 7  Posted 30 weeks, 6 days ago  
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80 says he's gay
#50 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 6 days ago  
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...that was...some WEIRD foreplay. Bookworm Mating Ritual!
#51 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 6 days ago  
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o my
#52 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>implying not into butts:ajsmug:
#53 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 6 days ago  
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i love you
#54 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 6 days ago  
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im thinking the whole "come on, just fuck each other already!!"
#55 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 5 days ago  
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>>13367 Hell yeah!
#56 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 5 days ago  
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huh. so thats how bookworms mate...
#57 Chapter 9  Posted 30 weeks, 5 days ago  
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That...  sure was a thing.  I'm definitely interested to see how Pinkie's arc on this ends.  :rainbowlaugh:
#58 Chapter 9  Posted 30 weeks, 5 days ago  
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>>13751
I've read this before and trust me: you will like it.
#59 Chapter 9  Posted 30 weeks, 5 days ago  
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I find it strange to think that a society where females get the urge to have sex with anypony once a year would make prostitution illegal. It seems more like a public service.
#60 Chapter 9  Posted 30 weeks, 5 days ago  
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She so horny she love you long time.
#61 Chapter 9  Posted 30 weeks, 5 days ago  
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That was so.... yeah. :derpyderp1:

\('o')/
#62 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 5 days ago  
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>>13671

I think we mean courtship
#63 Chapter 9  Posted 30 weeks, 5 days ago  
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dont taze me brah!!
#64 Chapter 10  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Orange Julius? You clever person you. :pinkiecrazy:

BTW.

Incest? Really?:ajbemused:
#65 Chapter 10  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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this is getting interesting, a little bit more clarification on that last part would help
#66 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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dafuq
#67 Chapter 9  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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what the fuck
#68 Chapter 10  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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why must you make applejack fuck her uncle

what the fuck man

what

the

fuck

bro
A Brony (guest)
#69 Chapter 7  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Im puting it ALLLLLLL in.:ajbemused:
#70 Chapter 10  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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the buck is this shit?:rainbowhuh:
A Brony (guest)
#71 Chapter 8  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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And here we see the bookworm in her natural habitat, preforming the mating ritual of her kind, by reciting text from multiple books involving sex.
A Brony (guest)
#72 Chapter 9  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Am i the ONLY one who gets the referance?
(guest)
#73 Chapter 10  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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:applejackconfused:
#74 Chapter 10  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Jesus Christ. So wrong yet so interesting!
#75 Chapter 10  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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first i was all :applejackunsure:

Then i was like :rainbowderp:

Then i was all :twilightoops:

Now im all :duck:
#76 Chapter 10  Posted 30 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Suprise buttsecks?
#77 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 3 days ago  
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*spits out drink* what the hay just happend here?
#78 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 3 days ago  
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Bwahaha. These comments.

I can't wait until you guys see the Rarity chapter.
A Brony (guest)
#79 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 3 days ago  
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>>14883
Let me give you the abridged version.
RD: He's cool!
TFH: Who are you?
RD: What to fuck?
TFH: No.
*start fucking*
#80 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 3 days ago  
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...You are a genius at introducing original characters, and interactions between the mane 6. What can i say besides...
...
...
...MOAR!:flutterrage:
#81 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 3 days ago  
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DEEEEERRRRRRRP:pinkiecrazy:
#82 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 3 days ago  
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SLOW MO AMAZING AWESOME BLAGHRG NEss
#83 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 3 days ago  
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oh course. rainbow is still a lesbian.... figures. :ajbemused:
#84 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 3 days ago  
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......Que?
#85 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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Nanananana BATMARE after all X3
#86 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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Sorry To Spam Kinda, But I Kinda Need Pre-Readers  For My Story If Thats Ok With You:fluttershyouch:
#87 Chapter 11  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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Uptown girl
She's been living in her uptown world
I bet she's never had a backstreet guy
I bet her momma never told her why!!!

Lawl, story is pretty boss so far
#88 Chapter 3  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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Lulz, I need to watch that Southpark episode again. Nice reference :rainbowlaugh:
#89 Chapter 10  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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Why am I still reading? :applecry:
Titan (guest)
#90 Chapter 12  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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My heart fills with:yay: everytime I read a story with fluttershy being awesome.
#91 Chapter 12  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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OUT OF ALL POSSIBLE THING, THIS IS THE BEST POSSIBLE THING:raritystarry:
#92 Chapter 12  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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“Oh, yes, it’s just so big.  So frightening." OH i thought she mean't his dick :rainbowlaugh: *cough* um what? *cough*
#93 Chapter 1  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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I read the first line and i said "WTF, MY BODY IS READY!"    Confound you writers based off of sexual orientation of ponies, you drive me to read on! :flutterrage::rainbowlaugh:
#94 Chapter 12  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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“Would you like to come up to my hotel room with me?” bow chicka wow wow
#95 Chapter 12  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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Wow.  And Fluttershy is the one who has a romantic evening and actually manages to ask her chosen guy up to her room *first*?

:yay:
#96 Chapter 12  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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Billy reminds me of someone i know. i like this, i like it alot :unsuresweetie:
#97 Chapter 2  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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>>11015 Best. Pic. Ever.
#98 Chapter 12  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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*squee*
#99 Chapter 12  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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>>15508 Tucker, shut up.
#100 Chapter 12  Posted 30 weeks, 2 days ago  
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Why did I automatically think Billy Mays when I saw his name? His native name?

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