Fallout Equestria: Pink on Black

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Comment posted by Rizzlepony deleted Sep 8th, 2013

RoseHorse

RoseHorse #2 · Sep 8th, 2013 · · · Not How I Imagined My End ·

Okay, It's good I'll give you that, the names seem a bit silly to me at first and I got a good laugh when he said "I'd fuck me." But besides that, it is good and you should keep up the good work, there are a few grammar mistakes and double spaces in the fic, also some letters missing from words, sorry I'm to tired to point them out, Maybe later but besides that keep up the great work can't wait for the next chapter.

Necro Bob

Necro Bob #3 · Sep 8th, 2013 · · · Not How I Imagined My End ·

Rock will never take off. It'll fall like a Led Zepplin

Cloverleaf

Cloverleaf #4 · Sep 9th, 2013 · · · Not How I Imagined My End ·

3176600 I'm looking into it already, you may find several of the spelling mistakes will be fixed. Grammatical errors i'm looking for some help from a couple others on that front. I've got a few sources I can check first on that. Still, these errors are what I get for having a word program that likes to hide it's spell check function.

3176639 Perhaps, but you never know.

Deathpony