I'm a brony. What more can i say?
One night, a strange creature is found on Fluttershy's doorstep, and chaos breaks free from it's bonds. What is it doing here, why can't it remember where it came from, how did Discord escape his stony prison, and just what is Celestias name is a human?
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First chapter, and I like where this is going. But where did the whole "Discord" thing come from?
You have my track.
266248 I think she got the Discord part from this "sIgn turtle mekka mekka high cotton candy pie ballonS apple puppets milk rain Clowns elements checkmate statue pOcket knife gRiffons tail bat wing trolls moon laughter"
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Not only that part, the whole thing
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Anyways, tracking
270804 I didn't think anypony would catch that! Good eye.
Interesting story so far
tracking
and so the plot continues to rear its ugly head. Slowly.
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
This has to be one of the biggest cliffhangers I've ever seen.
Well done.
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I thought it was terrible.
You shouldn't just cut it off and have us waiting to find out the big revelation (even though it is pretty obvious), but make us anticipate the ponies reaction to said revelation. A mid setence cut off just feels quite unprofessional.
418724 Well, I can tell you one of those is right.
418724 I dont see how it could be Applejack, but maybe im just blind.
and a little fix here 420959
“Well, dear sister, it seems that things are about to get strange in Equestria.” The lunar Princess looked to her elder, eliciting a smile.
“No Luna, things are about to get interesting.
”* * *
you had some spacing errors
Pretty good chapter though, even if it was short.
421801 Fixed it, thanks for pointing that out.
Nice chapter, liked it.
Man, Applejack is soooooooo racist. BOO TO YOU, JACKIE!!!!