Vinyl felt that life was beginning to get too normal for her. Wake up, pick on Tavi, do some dub-step, go to sleep.
After getting kicked out of the house for the twentieth time after breaking something of her friend's she finds herself finding a very strange earth pony wrapped in a silver light...
(Ok decided to remake this story to see if it will be much better going in this direction. Hopefully you ponies like it)
Synch: Ooh! A Vi snd Tavi story?! Let's read it!
Darkfire:Fine...
Synch: I eagerly await more.
well written. Not really any complaints, and I can't wait for more
3241098 working on it as we speek
So is the dude an OC or is he someone I have been wanting to see crossover-ed into MLP for a while now... GRAY FULLBUSTER!?
probably not though...
3418573 Heheh...
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If it was Gray Fullbuster, there would be a crossover tag
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yeah your right.
This is interesting but I don't know where its going. If it were a crossover I would understand, but it seems to be somepony named Gray does stuff in Equestria. And if its done well, it will be good. So keep it up. I wish this was a Fairy Tail crossover... There aren't enough of those, and I still need to watch the entirety of the show
Finally a new update! I have been waiting. For some reason I like the idea and characteristics of the story and would definitely love to see it progress. Any way enough of my incessant nattering; I hope the writing fairs well and the plot develops. Till next time!
This is quite interesting, certainly got me hooked. I would make two points to you, firstly, Octavia says that Gray has been asleep for three days, but Vinyl immediately says that he was lucky she'd been out "last night." Then just after that, you seem to have misspelled definitely as defiantly.
But these are small things in an otherwise interesting story. Can't wait to see where this is going!
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Oh wow. Thanks for the catch!