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Master Lyra


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"Kids, Ah had never had a special somepony. Ah was quite lonely. Well, that was so until one faithful night a long while back. But maybe that's a little too far. Let's start at the beginning. The gang consisting of me, Caramel, Twilight, Rarity and Fluttershy met every single weekend to go to The Squeezed Lemon. We were good friends, we were. Well, not all the time. Anyway, it was a night like any other. But by the end of the night, an event that changed my whole life started. Ah called it The Race"

This story is my first attempt at romance or comedy. I thought it would be funny to have Big Mac as a main character for something, and well, the rest is history.

Note: Borrows some ideas from How I Met Your Mother. If you watch the show, you will notice the similarities but by no means will the story be the same.

First Published
26th Feb 2012
Last Modified
19th Jul 2012
#1 · 147w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

Oh god the potential in this :pinkiehappy:

I mean, I banged Derpy UPSIDE DOWN! What’s not to love about that?!” :rainbowlaugh:

Please tell me Big mac wins :applecry:

Tracking

#2 · 147w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

This has the potential to be LEGEN-

Wait for it....

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...DARY!

#3 · 146w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Making it a race, especially if Caramel knows it's a race, seems a very callous and mean spirited thing for Big Mac to do.  Up till now you've given no hint he's the competitive type like Rainbow Dash and there's nothing a girl likes more than to find out there was some kind of deal or bet attached to her going out or being with a guy.  I really hope your story isn't headed down that kinda frat-boy route.

That out of the way it was nice reading a story where no one dies, the fate of Equestria isn't in danger, and no Mary Sues'.  I'll track it to see where you decide to take things.

#4 · 146w, 4d ago · · · Prologue ·

As the upper fellow said, it's good to see a simple fic that isn't grimdark, extreme shipping etc. for once a while. Now you get me second chapter and we can discuss even more:raritywink:

#5 · 146w, 4d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>269835

I was going to point out why Big Mac would do these things. I really was.

But then I decided I should integrate it into the story. Your concern is well placed, however, but no one really knows Big Mac's character enough to tell if he is competitive or not.

Thanks for inspiring me to put it the story, but I probably was going to show why eventually.

Also, no one is going to die, but no promises on the whole world thing.:derpytongue2:

#6 · 145w, 4d ago · · · Prologue ·

Caramel = Barney

Hoo boy.

#7 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>301952

Well, while it is true I based their personalities on the characters, they will be different in some core aspects. Like I have already shown, Caramel really trusts Big Mac and confided in him about his feelings, which Barney would never do.

But yeah, expect clop-suggestive humor.

Riz
#9 · 132w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

I wanna ask when will the next chapter will be out ? :pinkiesmile:

#10 · 129w, 20h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>698972

Wait, someone commented on this story? Lol.

I'm going to start sometime this week on the next chapter. Since I was a jerk and delayed it oh... 18 weeks.

Sorry :(

well the concept of this story is great plus a ship i really like so yeah cant wait to see what you are going to do :twilightsmile:

Riz

I WANT MORE !!!! please...:fluttercry:

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