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FinnPony


A writer from Finland. Don't know if there's anything else to add really.

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This story takes place during, and shortly after Titillating Trifecta.

Story was inspired by SnugBunny's picture with same name.

Rarity gets to know with Rumble's big brother Thunderlane during Rumble's visit at the Carousel Boutique. She then notices that one certain stallion keeps spinning in her thoughts, and decides that she has to do something about it.
Is it even possible for such a lady like Rarity to fall in love with a rough and bad mannered pony like Thunderlane?

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 46 )

3548344
Im glad you like it! Most people have problem with RariLane shippings though..
I don't understand why..

good chapter but seriously, did you have to put that small scene with Rainbow giving Applejack a kiss on the cheek?

wait if rumble and sweetie date then what if rarity and thunder lane marry would that be incest?

3560818
well they have been together in my stories for a while now.. I thought that I should add something about them. Like I did with Fluttershy and Big Macintosh.

3561680
Incest is wincest.. Right?

I love Rarity X Thunderlane fics!

3604602
Glad that I'm not the only one!

3687412
Oops. I'l fix that right away.

Comment posted by Soulless Ginger deleted Jan 14th, 2014

3561680 It's only incest if it's blood related, such as parents with their children or brother and sisters, etc. If Rarity and Thunderlane did marry, and Sweetiebelle and Rumble are in a relationship, that would make them brother and sister in-laws, which is legal.

3837344
That's exactly the one I was describing! :yay:
I just added couple more details to it.

This is so good! :pinkiehappy:

Tämä on tosi hyvä! :pinkiehappy:

4439993
I know! Also thanks for the fav and watch! :pinkiehappy:

just need to know before i read this, did you deal with spike? or just completely forget about him like a lot of authors do?
or was he in the story before this?

4440298
Relationship between Spike and Rarity is explained in the other story that is mentioned in the description. I kinda forgot to mention that mane six is about 20-25 in my stories so Spike's a teenager now and has kinda grown out of his crush...

It's good that your highlighting Rarity's thoughts in italics but you need to be consistent. If your going to describe her remembering Thunderlane and her previous crush, you need to put them in a proper context for a story written in third-person. Either that or cut it from the story entire if it has no consequence for the rest of the story. So far it does nothing to help, and instead adds padding to an introduction that should be interesting.

Dammit haven't even read this but I know how it ends because of shadowy love

Grammatical errors and all. Still a great fic

Not bad, I'm already starting to like this ship a lot. I really think Rarity and Thunderlane make a perfect couple. I wouldn't even ship Thunderlane with any other pony from the show, just saying.

The fic was a really fun read, it's already in my favs.:twilightsmile:

With a bit of a polish up with this story, it could be a really good Rarilane fic, it's rather well detailed and cute. It's a shame you been gone for so long though, I'd love to read more of this pairing and others you had planned.

Hmm very interesting so it looks like Rarity develop a crush on him ever since that tornado accident back at the Wonderbolt Academy which they never spoke to each other at all ever since she really want to know about him maybe but I wonder how this will go

Wow Rarity really got it bad for Thunder Lane even dreams about him

Ohh wow it looks like they finally saw each other and apparently Thunder Lane had a crush on Rarity as well but originally he was supposed to look for his brother but it looks like both Rarity and Thunder Lane are going on a date I wonder how that would turn out

So I was right he did had a crush on Rarity he just didn't know how to approach this situation and now he's a little bit more nervous about the date but I Can't Help but Falling in Love with her even though they only met just a day or two well this should be very interesting

Awww this was a pretty cute chapter so it was one of those unexpected dates but both of them we're glad that they wanted to do this so Thunder Lane took her to the a place where they can drink and even dance which that's pretty cool and she even embedded about she never properly thanked him for saving her from that episode Wonderbolts Academy they even dance together which it was very cute then after later that night Thunder Lane took Rarity home and before he leaves they both kiss each other on the cheek again it's very cute

"I'ts settled then."

That's

It looks like Thunderlane wanted to return the tie to Rarity but when he got there she was in the middle of making a dress and apparently it was a trust that she made for herself and she looks really amazing they are really cute together and it looks like they're going to have another date with each other

"He seemed pretty exited about something yesterday, and went flying in the evening."

Excited

Another cute chapter so Rarity was pretty to go on a date with thunderlane but unfortunately Rumble told her that he got sick with the feather flu and so she has another plan she went over his house to help him to feel better and even clean up his house which dang it was really sweet of her to do that for him and not only that they share a moment with each other which again very cute I love it

Usually that always happens when a couple gets in a heated argument there's a lot of things we never meant to say but when they insult you you want to insult them back it was nice a Fluttershy giving a advice about how relationship is never easy but it can be fixed they just need to calm down and talk this over and she even admitted that she is in love with Big Mac which Rarity is fine with that so that's good

So it looks like Rarity was trying to find Thunder Lane and apologize to him but it looks like he had the same thing as well he even bought roses for her pretty funny that everybody is witnessing including her friends what's going on between Rarity and Thunder Lane but they forgive each other and even sealed it with a kiss which it is very nice now she has to explain to her friends now

"Have you ever wanted a foal?" Rarity asked casually, but Thunderlane almost choked to his soup. He coughed for a minute, hitting his chest with his hoof. Rarity looked worried, but soon Thunderlane managed to get his coughing under control, and he asked carefully: "Isn't it pretty early to be thinking about that?" Rarity chuckled cutely, and took Thunderlane's hoof into her own.

Yes seriously Rarity you're moving a little bit too fast 😅

Well those are very cute story I've always thought that would be a cute shipping specially what happened in the episode Wonderbolts academy but it's really really cute story and it's pretty good there was some spelling errors but it was not bad keep up the good work

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