A strange creature is found in the Canterlot castle and is brought to the Canterlot dungeons for containment and research, but it proves just a bit more cunning and resourceful than anticipated, not to mention fearsome, and escapes.
What will happen, what will the vile beast do and where are Celestia´s cakes?
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first change the font and two I prefer the other opening over this because it just seemed more authentic
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I can understand that, the original opening was quite good if you ignore Shining's rant.
But this is supposed to be a completely different story while still having the epic fight scenes that everyone loved, (don´t worry, Celestia is going to fight the human in the next chapter or the one after that.) Also need to change the description.
3288177 agreed and any clue what's with the font
The writing it's way much better than the previous one, congratulations, now i am truly interested in the story. Looking forward for the next chapter.
Is this set before or after the removed chapters?
3288837 The removed chapters won't happen. Although not in the same way if I'm understanding this right.
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Correct
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What wrong with the font?
3290389 never mind computer glich
are you gonna change the story summary?, cause based on the new chapter it seems he was found in the castle
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I thought i already did. You think i have to revert submission and submit it again?
3294984 its weird, the summary works on the main page but when i look at your list of sstories the description is different
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Fixed
I. Eat. Your. BAKING SUPPLIES!! I EAT 'EM ALL!!
Awesome.
shit will hit the fan in 3...2.....1....
And that, my friends, is why I love this story.
"It´s a dumb animal" get ready to eat those words shining when is systematicaly starts to break bones
and...
MORTAL KOMBAT
There is not a fan in the entire world to describe the shit it's about to hit.
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I need more of this asap!!!!
Still good. Let's continue.
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"I. Eat. Your. Force of Nature."
-Scout
and the plot fucking thickens.....
i hope to use "FINISH HIM" at some point in this fic
Hey Celestia...
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Human used No Holds Barred Curb Stomp Beatdown!
It's super effective!
Shining Armor and Celestia fainted!
FINISH THEM!!!
And here, we, go.
She didn't just called a human an animal. Didn't she.
update tomorrow....
This rewrite is good, very good, i hope to see a better kick-butt action scene whit a Celestia and Shining on the ground.
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And half dead if not dead.
-XxRUSxX
The amount of shit about to hit the fan will probably knock it over and I'll be there to watch every second of it.
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Why wouldn't she? It's not like she knew what the hell a human was, or is. They haven't even called THE human A human yet; they still think of him as an "IT". An unknown.
Going by simple observation, a human wouldn't be perceived as a threat; no fur patterns or scales or skin tones that identify them as a dangerous creature, no claws, no large, easily noticeable sharp teeth, nothing that belies the sheer awesome power that some of the human race have shown in the past. Naked, and to one that doesn't know any better(and clearly these ponies don't) there isn't much to distinguish us from any other ape, aside from the lack of fur of course.
From the original content, before the reset of chapters, this guy was an asskicking machine, and magic barely did anything to him. Why was he able to outright destroy the guards, Luna and Celestia? They underestimated him. The human race has been doing that to itself since the dawn; it's easy to see that these ponies are more than capable of making the same mistakes we are.
All the stuff above aside, this guy is going to open a Texas-Sized Can O' Whoop Ass on these poor ponies.
And I can't wait to read it!
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Just half dead? I bet they can survive whit a little less life on them.
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I was just trying to say a meme. But I can't find a photo for it.
Shit hitting the fan is too weak for what's about to happen it should be: "Diarrhoea's about to hit the helicopter".
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FIGHT! *bones broken*
FINISH HIM! *Epic kick to the chest, collapsing lungs*
FATALITY!
God, who is this badass mother fucker unleashing a six pack of whoopass?
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Freaking awesome chapter dude!
Well I always enjoy a nice fight scene and some beatings. Great chapter!
Out of curiosity, Is the reason why the human seems to act like he is not able to communicate or reason things out going to be explained?
Kill kill kill everypony must die
That was so beautiful... *sniff, sniff*
dam son this guy is ripping asses open. have to say though snapping a guys spine and then neck? shit that's harsh. still i'm giving these ponies very little sympathy cuz of the shit greeting he got(seriously? dumping water on him because it was funny? Dicks.)
im under the impression that neither side is speaking the same language. kinda ballsy of celestia to hug something that is basically punching everything to death if you ask me
holy mother of sweet cupcake goddess AWESOME !
I'm a little put off because he seems like an animal. Is he human? Or a mindless beast?
Superb. Needs more.