Tag Along, Do-si-Do, and Thin Mint are the best of friends. Over the years, they’ve done it all as Cookie Cadets - camping, hiking, nature walks, knot tying, athletics, baking, and even getting the rare and misunderstood Community Service badge. But there’s one thing they’ve never managed to do - Win the Equestrian Cookie Cadet Cookie Selling Contest.
But Tag Along has a plan - This year is going to be different.
This year, they’re going after the biggest customer of them all.
A Silly Filly Oneshot
Edited by Inky Jay
Chapters (1)
This is a good story.
...But do they sell 144 cookies per second like I do?
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They need to get on my level.
That was a good one.
Loved every minute of it and went and re read it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Incredibly cute. I really needed this right now.
I'll comment legitimately after my house is done being remodeled.
And so Pinkie's true plan is revealed.
Terrorist Pie is a go! Repeat, Terrorist Pie is a go!
Still reading, but before I forget...
Go ask my buddy stereo_sub for help with voice and flair, he's one of the best I know. Tell him I sent you. If nothing else, read his thing about Scratch and his thing called RUN.
This story was super cute! Loved every bit of it!
On another note:
Make this happen!
And so, after winning their competition, the three fillies spent seven years cleaning Canterlot castle.
That was a lot of fun! About the only nitpick I have is a few unnecessary apostrophes here and there...
Cute.
Now that I've had the time to sit down and read it, that was ADORABLE! Glad to see you can write light-hearted as well as super emotional works. Love it.
That was really fun to read
I kinda wanted to know what the rest of their stuff was for tho lol
Well... since they hang out with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, I can see why they would over complicate things... but I have to say that was absolutely adorable beyond words. Great story and great job!
Loved it! I like your style and vocabulary. Wouldn't mind more about these three silly fillies, maybe prequel?
What?
That was adorable!
3162732 hey, at least they were together!
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precisely. I think theres something behind the scene going on there...
This was awesome! Only three fillies from Ponyville could execute a plan like this, and pull it off! It's a shame that they got caught, but at least they probably won that final badge they wanted before they were done.
Now that I've read this story, I kind of want filly scouts to be a thing in the show if it isn't already.
Beautiful, very cute and fun.
Your story was submitted to the Good Grammar Directory, but failed to qualify.
If you wish to discuss it feel free to PM me. (Sorry about the lateness of it, I am working on a backlog of submissions)
BTW, I enjoyed it a lot
You can has review!
I came here from PaulAsaran's review and I wasn't disappointed. This was an adorable, whimsical, and well written piece of Comedic Slice of Life.
I love each and every one of the characters and their dynamics. I love how well thought out their scheme was, even if it didn't go as planned. And I love the interactions between the characters.
But the thing I love most of all is that without going into detail, you subtly taught us so much about the characters, their interactions with the CMC and others, their life they regularly live in Ponyville, and so much more. It has a direct storyline it tells us, one that is adorable and clever. But it also had an indirect or subtle complexity to each character and their personalities that were either only briefly mentioned or implied through their thoughts, words, and actions.
In shorter terms, this was wonderful.
Signing out, VShuffler42
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Cookie Cadet Caper was always one of those works I had a deep and abiding love for in my heart. It never garnered many views, but I had way too much fun writing it. Seeing such positive praise for it as I trawl through the comments, all these years later, well... Gave me the warm fuzzies.
As a small behind-the-scenes joke, the strange gear-up scene is a direct reference to The Great Muppet Caper, one of my all-time favorite movies.
Thank you for this 4-year-delayed moment of joy. Hope you find many more stories to give proper love to.
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The pleasure was all mine, let me assure you.