You now face godlike judgement. May it extend eternally.
Inspired by: Tristam - I Remember
Cover by: MisteeLala
Vinyl comes across a very simple melody tucked away in a book in the Canterlot Archive. Seeing it as a huge break, she brings it, and the memories it stores, to the forefront of Equestrian music and history.
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A not romantic, not TwiShy? Who are you and what have you done to Darq?
In all seriousness...I am intrigued
Good start! I'm wondering how Vinyl is going to use this...I want more!
Interesting.. Looking forward to next chapters
I'm also willing to find out how this was inspired by the song
I love that song and the rest of Tristam's work, I think I do sort- of understand how you were inspired.
*scans story with tricorder*
It's dead, Jim.
>>>Another shriek echoed in the night, freezing everyone in place once again. Anyone who had their wings open before it quickly found their wings had gone yeep, clinging tightly to their sides like foals who'd just had nightmares.>>>
Reminds me of the cry of the Nazgul.
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Definitely not dead. Damn near, but not dead.
<3 DarqFox
4230203 *injects some purified SCIENCE in hopes of reviving it!*
woah!! that part that I just didn't read! this is so cool!
Yay this is back, thanks Darq!
had a bit of a laugh there.
If they keep reading the book, you better include some lyrics from Till Its Over or even Once Again, else I will be pissed... jk I'm loving it so far, great job.
IT'S ALIVE?!
I don't normally read anything that isn't romance.
This is a very nice exception. That isn't clop.
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There will definitely be more fun things.
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I assure you this will be a most wonderful change of pace.
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YA! ZIS STORY LIVES!
<3 DarqFox
4712261 *notes that it's both sad and dark... and prepares to watch ponies die horribly in extremely slow motion...*
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I can assure you it's best read now.
<3 DarqFox
I couldn't resist
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Wrong song.
<3 DarqFox
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I know.
Tristam made a good song, but as I said, I couldn't help but not post deadmau5s' "I Remember," considering it's one of my favorite songs and also one of his best hits.
Tristams' song is pretty good too.
Never, ever play a piece of music you find in a book about war and gruesome death by insane magical freaks.
It's almost certain to be a spell for madness.
Now, if you're already totally insane and fine with being that way, then you're safe! *like meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
I would think it'd be more like 'Discord beating his Chrysalis' or something like that.
Do ponies have something they call 'the Devil'?
Always remember to consider the world you're writing in. Certain colloquialisms of ours simply won't make sense there. You may often need to invent your own.
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I forgot about Tirek until a few hours ago, but I can justify that ponies would simply refer to him as the devil. Either way, it seems fine, and I can justify it when asked, so I'll just leave it how it is.
Thank you much for commenting (twice)! I love getting comments. It makes my day.
<3 DarqFox
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commented, did I make your day?hue
The detail is awesome. You're creating an environment in the book that I'm really liking so far. Keep it up!
Sooo, looking at the tags here... guessing the song is going to be cursed and make ponies kill themselves or something.
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Nope. No one dies in the Modern side of the story. That much I can assure without spoiling shit.
</3 DarqFox
5339128 But a bajillion ponies die in the past?
Mountains of dead ponies!
Looking forward to when this comes out of hiatus!
I Remember-ed this was on hiatus,