• Member Since 3rd Jan, 2013
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When Twilight recieves a mysterious gift in the mail, things start taking a turn for the worse when a mysterious evil is accidentally unleashed. Something horrible has come to Ponyville. Something that attacks ponies and drags them away in the middle of the night. And no pony seem to be able to stop it.

Proofread by GoWeegee
Cover art by Candy Bloom

This is my first foray into Dark stuff, so don't blame me if you don't get scared. Rated teen due to some violent scenes.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

Sufficiently creepy opening.

I like where this is going.

Write on,
Legion

Dark goo? I know enough Internet to know where this is going. The feature box, that's what!

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Maybe when pigs start to fly:twilightblush:
I seriously doubt this one will end up anywhere Close to the feature box, but thanks for the support.

Two paragraphs into the prologue and I was hooked. This is engaging, intriguing, and creepy. I must have more. Probably helps that I've been creeped out by gooey black evil goop since I saw The X-Files movie (the first one) way back when I was 9 years old (thanks a lot, dad :facehoof:). Anyway, I am loving this story and can't wait for more.

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