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darf
pony-writer/pornographer looking for work. old stories undeleted. i'm sorry. Patreon here
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Ice dildo. Hot. As always, glad to see more stuff from you.
And he's back in action, awesome!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Oh yeh, darfasaurus is back in business. You're a dinosaur now, darf
DAMN. That was, uh, hot!
The cold was hot! Erm... Fuckit, I can't think of anything clever.
~Skeeter The Lurker
man rarity get's all the solo fics.....
this was hot and cold at the same damn time, and this gave me an idea. Now when it gets too hot outside; I can bring out my trusty ice-pussy!
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That's because Rarity's a freak in the sack, baby.
Glorious, delicious and downright painful, I should think. Good job bodies are resilient things.
That was a real blast, darf. Great job :)
Ice Dildoes... Just when you think you can't be amazed by the internet anymore...
My, my... Miss lily-white oh-so-proper is a dirty little mare behind closed doors, isn't she...
Have a like and 10/10 Pinkies
darf gon give it to ya!
(What?!)
Fuck thinkin' you can get it on your own,
darf gon deliver to ya!
(Yeah!)
Chapter 2.
The box opened with a click.
"Oooh," Sweetie Belle said, "popsicle!"
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y must u do this
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Mwahahaha. I exist to ruin everything you hold dear.
… wait no that's Amit
Ok, I actually have no idea
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Seriously, though, this was good reading. Vibrant use of language, keeping the story fresh without either getting purple or drawing attention to itself. The only repetition that stood out was the metallic taste of blood, but in a weird way even that worked, because usually the repetitive language in a piece of porn is going to be dealing with the genitalia play, and that's a nice feint calling attention to related sensations.
You are amazingly good at this, might I suggest something with Fluttershy? I'd love to see what you could do with her!
Okay, THAT is an engineering solution!
Instant dislike never reading anything again
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..we want a lady in da street, but a freak in da bed!!!
So this seems like a story u pulled out your ass
you got one skilled ass sir
sorry a lady should not say such things anyway great story keep doing with what ever you're doing
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I believe the saying is "Lady in the streets, freak(or whatever word you want) in the sheets"
3067923 And thus Vaginacooling was born
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NO!! THAT'S ICE CREAM!!!
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O please... Don't tell me...
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Hey. I remember you!
3075261 Oh god 14 dislikes
Good enough for a like from me
Rarity suicidal much? Nicely written but leaves a weird feeling.
Enjoyable to a degree. Loved the scene building in the story. Everything has just enough detail of the surroundings to give us a good vision, and combines a bit of her personality and thought process. It's impressive that you can blend them both together instead of dedicating an entire paragraph to one or the other.
Wasn't really a fan of the clopping. It was described well, and I liked the idea of an ice dildo, but I was really put off by the multiple descriptions of Rarity's blood moving through her lips. Yuck.
A few things to point out:
any specific reason it's a "unusually hot day in fall" instead of just " a regular hot day in summer"?
>there was a clear lone object lay
sounds like a typo
Describing something as a "damp sandbag pressing against" is not appealing in any way. Whether it's the thought of sand in one's vagina, or that a pair of breasts feel just like sandbags, sand just isn't erotic (unless you're having sex in a desert area).
Decent clop, with a few hangups. Eh, I'll give it an upvote.
3067923 Engineering? No, engineered. You just need to know how to implement it without magic.
And on that note, those water-bottle ice molds work well enough for purposes.
I've never read something like this. Wow.
Very nice, very nice.
Good job.
Oh man, these stories must come from some strange areas of the mind. It's both wonderful and horrifying how many ways a person's sexuality can develop. While this kind of thing is pretty much the opposite of arousing for me, I can appreciate the artistry. It must suck for people who have this kind of darkness inside them and lack the talent to use art to exorcize it.
Oh my stars that was good!