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The Patriotic Pony


I am a brony from the north living in the south. My writing and art may be amateurish, but I don't care as long as you guys enjoy it! I'm working with a fellow novice and a good friend, Swift Ebony.

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Why did Star Swirl the Bearded create a spell that could cause so much damage? Why is there no record of his life afterwards? What happened to the greatest conjurer in Equestrian history?

These are only a few of the questions that have plagued Twilight Sparkle. They have robbed her of many a night's rest, and she has had no fortune in finding the answers in any book.

Yet when all hope seems lost, she finds them in her former enemy. Unfortunately, he can't answer her questions without giving her a "little" background. So, with Twilight listening attentively, Discord recalls the times that only he and the Sisters remember.

But there are some things even the Princesses don't know; things that have been sealed away with him for a thousand years. From the Creation of the Elements of Harmony to the Secrets of Star Swirl the Bearded, from the Reign of Discord to the Fall of the Crystal Empire, Twilight finds the answers to questions she didn't even realize she had, and discovers shocking secrets of the past, and the many ponies involved.

NOTE: Chapter Five is in the process of being revamped. Future chapters will begin once the revamp is completed.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 24 )

This is very good. Excellent storyline, decent writing style and a nice lack of obvious spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. I can't wait to see where this will go. Keep up the good work.

Love it so far can't wait for discord to get involed

Comment posted by The Patriotic Pony deleted Aug 21st, 2013

3057700 By the time I get to the REALLY good parts, you're either going to love him or hate his guts!

3269619 Thanks! Chapter four will be out sometime next month!

XD I loved the reference to Q!

can't wait to find out about changelings :pinkiehappy: and EVERYTHING ELSE.
this is amazing! :yay:

4089762 Good, because we're going to be exploring everything! EVERYTHING!

4457795 Thanks! It's going to be even better after the revamp!

Curse this pony logic of already having the name of what their destinies are!!! :flutterrage:

And a brilliant way to show it well done :3

Also you would think that with Cold Front's part in this story, he'd be "Warm Front" instead :P

I spy a PPG reference :3
"At least It's not a giant Fireball"

4769086 Tee Hee. And congrats on catching the reference!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE

6155270 OF COURSE ARE YOU DOUBTING MY 'MOOORRREEE-s' HOW DARE YOU THIS IS LIKE THE BEST HISTORY STORY THAT INVOLVES STARSWIRL THE BEARDED AND I CANT WAIT FOR WHEN DISCORD EXPLAINS OW HE MET STARSWIRL AND ALL THAT HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS SOON and GOOD LUCK WITH ALL OF YOUR OTHER STORIES (sorry for caps lock :P)

6155350 Wow... just, just wow... I didn't think there was anyone who was still reading this, let alone that enthusiastic! I'll see what I can do!

Comment posted by KitKatLove deleted Jul 2nd, 2015

6156803 Great! I can't wait for your update :) UPDATE SOOON PLEASE (if it's not to hard) :P

6158500 Once the revamp's done, the story picks up with the Journey North. Right now, I'm fixing the old Chapter Five.

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