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Anonsi


Hi. I'm Anonsi. The name is a mix of Anon & Anansi the Spider if you're wondering. I thought it was clever. I don't get out much.

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Description: Two years after the camps opened up, the Western Territories of the USA are nearly vacant. It is once more a frontier, ripe for exploration and settlement. On bequest of Princess Celestia, Twilight Sparkle is to experience the human world by joining a family of Pony Settlers on their journey out West. It's Dangerous to go alone however, so in an act of good will, the US government is sending someone to make sure no harm befalls the ponies.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 84 )

E'fffing Cute as hell!

“I’ve heard very good things about Star Wars,” said Twilight. Then she remembered more of her conversation with Kurt and added, “…but only the originals.” You heard right, Twilight.

I read this story from start to finish it was brilliantly done, good work!
btw heres some stuff you should check out good sir or mam

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EGjx93yB0gM&feature=related
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7305744/1/A_Terminal_Case_of_Irresponsibility

Awesome story, very action pack with good drama and character build up.

Rainbow Dash can travel at speeds in excess of 768 mph (trans-sonic), more than three times the maximum of that train.

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Neat. I believe I wrote that "Dash pales in comparison" line before everyone calculated all that pony math, and perhaps even before the Sonic Rainboom Episode itself.

If it really bothers any of you I'm willing to edit it to make it more fung-shway, but only if it really irks you guys.

one of my favorite CB story

I love this story. A great balance of action, comedy, ship-teasing, and fun. Nice work, Anonsi.

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Thank you thank you thank you, I'm glad you liked it. If there's anyway I can improve, don't be afraid to tell me.

Right, I've edited the opening of Part three so it lines up more with the actual show.

Why would you ever want to continue this fic. I mean, you can find well written enjoyable ponyfic anywhere..

:rainbowlaugh:

Gonna do a sequel and crank up the zany hijinks, then? Good!

Allegedly, I'll be updating "Yellowstone: The Series" every Monday. Unless I, you know, run out of gas or die. Or both.

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Cool, hope to see it cross-posted here soon. This was a great read, thanks!

hey is it OK that I use your human oc's for my story?
don't worry I'll include you in the credits.
and I'll make an account in FIMfiction when I'm finished with the prologue.
and this will be the 1st time for me writing a fanfic.
so please?

Ohh this sounds awesome!! heres some mythological creatures that you may find helpful (Ones a evil unicorn like one.)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shadhavar
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baykok

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The Baykok definitely sounds like something I can use.
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Ummm...Sure I guess. Is it a cameo or something more...fanfic of a fanfic of a fanfic of a fanfic? And if you're doing a full on TCB fic I would definitely post the first draft of it in the Conversion Bureau thread on Ponychan before posting it here. That way it can get some review and any errors that could be present will be found and corrected.
Here's a link to the current thread: http://www.ponychan.net/chan/fic/res/53616.html
Word of warning, Ponychan's /fic/ is like a workshop, so be prepared for people telling you how to fix things and actually act on those suggestions. If there's one thing I've found out through writing Yellowstone, it's that there are always more errors and ways to improve.

That and you can read the other REAMS of good TCB fanfiction from a dozen or so other (far more talented) authors.

To be continued?
Why would I want to do that?
Why would I want to write an episodic series of gothic monster fighting adventures
Involving a cowboy, Zorro, and a Russian guy who uses axes and shotguns
That may have more wackey hijinks with Twilight Sparkle?
That just sounds silly.


FOR THE LOVE OF GOD (WO)MAN!!!!

DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

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If I knew, I would tell you. Best answer I can come up with though? Collateral damage might have hurt one of the ponies and that's no good.

Russian with an axe.

Honestly, I would read a story that had that title. (Actually, considering that I've read Crime and Punishment, I very well may have...:rainbowhuh:) In any case, if you do turn this story into a series, I will definitely not be complaining.

Pyro`s overall score for Conversion Bureau Off-Shoot by Anonsi 5/5stars


YOU SIR ARE A GENIUS
it had the western style of one of clint eastwood`s movies with so much action
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:facehoof: *beats head against the desk* Guh, five or six chapters with her character in it, and I JUST NOW got the Megan reference. Wow, I'm getting slow.

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Yeah it's her alright, but based entirely off the Rescue from Castle Midnight version.

well given equestrian physics that allow for standing on clouds, magic, and nigh-instant stopping using only wings its possible that the speed of sound is significantly lower in equestria.

<<WARNING PLOT HOLE DETECTED>> FIRING ORBITAL COVER UP CANNON (EXPLANATION FOUND COMMENCING BULLSH*) well you see hawks personal armory is wrapped up and needs a key to unlock it. before cottonmounth attacked he lost the key, but managed to find it after he left when it was too late to use his arsenal against him. BULLSHIT COMPLETED.

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Oh that's not a good sign.
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At the time of that chapter the Sonic Rainboom episode wasn't out so I thought the train would be faster than RD, but I recently decided to change because that pony is pretty fast. Though now I actually have an explanation in my head that makes way more sense and keeps the train faster than the pony.
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That's like the third time someone has commented on that. Seems I better edit it so it makes more sense then.

ZOMG I just found this deep in the reaches of FIMfiction. IT. IS. AWESOME!

Wow, this is just AWESOME!!! Western gun fights AND ponies?? It doesnt get any better, though if the magna rail was a steam locomotive it might have added a little more 'BOOM' to the story haha

I loved this story. Had to read it all in one go it was so good. I haven't checked your profile yet, but I'm really hoping there's a continuation there. Excellent characterization, awesome action and best of all, you portrayed humans as...well human. Our full range from altruistic to savage to the true monsters. Excellent job! Have a Twilight! :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

he probably just didnt have time in that situation to rummage around in his bag for a rocket launcher. :pinkiegasp:

Awesome story 10/5stars
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i cant figure out how to actually get a picture on the comment...

Rereading this series again, because I can actually comment on it here...

and I just realized something...

Megan... from G1?!?

I even think you got her horses names right! Wow!

And besides... if anybody takes the g1 series with a grain of salt they have to admit that Megan does some pretty crazy things.

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Good eye. That is indeed G1 Megan from the pilot episode, Rescue from Castle Midnight. Except she's like...35 years old and 145% more violent.

First time reading this story. It had me at Hawk's description.

-Twilight calling herself out on her judgment of humanity?
-Sci-fi, fantasy, AND a Western?
-Human characters that are NOT unscrupulous political assholes but two flavors of badasses?

YOU SIR! HAVE EARNED MY LOYALTY!

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I'm flattered, but don't think I'm at the point where I should be earning anyone's loyalty just yet. Once I can get some timely and consistent updates out there, maybe then, but given my history that is unlikely.

I am LOVING where this is going!

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:ajbemused: Dang. Was hoping for a new chapter.

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I'm sure you're one of many. But remember, this is the old Yellowstone. Any updates to the actual story will be for YtS, not this.

Sorry to disappoint, but if it makes you feel better, now that I'm no longer working on this, I can focus entirely on episode 6!

675605 Actually I was a bit confused for a moment. I knew this was done, I was hoping for a new chapter in YtS and got mixed up temporarily.

This would make a good prime-time series.

"Han shot first?"
Okay, she may be a bigoted asshole, but at least she's knowlegable!

Jesus Howard Christ, I LOVE THIS STORY!

I almost missed this! This is just.... so AWESOME!

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