I forget what I wish to remember and remember what I wish to forget.
The last thing Twilight Sparkle expected at her doorstep was a lemon with a body riding an equally bizarre lemon camel. He claims he has come from a distant land called Ooo in search of knowledge.
Knowledge of the magic of friendship, in fact. Twilight and her friends thereon vow to teach him all they know so that Lemongrab may finally acquire a true friend of his own.
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A strange crossover but overall the story is nice! I shall await for further chapters!
-icudeadnow-
*Brohoof*
3012708 Thanks, glad you like it!
3012717 I accidently unfollowed you. I followed again. I didn't realize that I had already followed you. Damn my forgetfulness.
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Nice.
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Unacceptabllllllllllllllllllle!
Twilight! you are the world's most prominent expert on friendship!
You shall aid this fine lemony fellow or you shall face...
One million years in the dungeoooooooooooon!!!
...I really like this idea. I think I'll follow this.
3013005
Thanks!
UNACCEPTABLEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
3013218 Is this... story unacceptable?
3013221
Nah.... BANANA JOE xD
No explanation needed.
I'm not usually big on crossovers, but I will be following this, for Lemongrab is awesome
3015309
Yay!
How....is this not comedy,i mean dude.....IT'S LEMONGRAB
3025545 I suppose. I am conflicted between comedy and d'aww.
I'll get back to you on that.
3025648 lol okay
...ACCEPTABLE.
3060638
Awesome!
I had no clue what to expect with this crossover, but now I'm lovin it
.-. Stupid Lemon. I'll squirt the juice outta him.
3061058 Glad to hear it.
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I was wondering how long it would take Lemongrab to try and send someone to the dungeon. Didn't expect him to not make an actual dungeon though. As a side note, will he do that in every one of the Mane Six's houses? Write the word "DUNGEON" on one corner of the room?
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SHADDUP LEMONGRAB IS THE oh wutever. >:/
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It depends... what would you prefer? I think he might try to, but then they catch him and he grumbles a little.
3069261 Personally, I'm fine with pretty much any direction this story could go except clop. It's Lemongrab. It's kinda hard to screw up when you have him.
3069974 XD Ha! Lemongrab clop. I can't even....
3071597 YOU can't even, but I assure you, somewhere, there's a person who's done it.
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I just lost a sizeable amount of my faith of this world.
Calling it now. Lemongrab will make friends with the mane six and the CMC, but not Spike. Prejudiced motherfucker.
3182255
I forgot Spike!
I forgot about this scene XD, the stuff of nightmares
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I know, right? It freaked me out.
UNEXPECTABLE
I'll read this later.
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Yay!
3184400 ah now that I have slepted I can read...
.-. I thought he was gonna say " This castel is UNACCEPTABLE!!!!!!! " xD
Now since I have read this I must request that you continue IF NOT YOU GET THREE CHAPTERS DUNGEON (and that is UNEXEPTABLE!!!!!)
3184695 And then scream? Yeah, I can see why you might think that.
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No! No! There'll be more... I swear....
3186160 no update no update! NO UPDATE NO UPDATE! UNEXEPTABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THREE CHAPTERS DUNGEON
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Oops.
ONE MILLION YEARS DUNGEON IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON
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Oh my, I'm sorry I forgot about this. Which pony would you like to go next?
YOU MUST DO FLUTTTERSHY! SHE'S SO SWEET AND INNOCCCEEEENNNTTTTT
AHHHHHHHH.
SORRY FOR MY FREAK OUTS I HAVE A HARD TIME COTROLLING MY IMPULSESSS
thank you.
3935959 Great minds think alike! I was already planning Fluttershy for the next chapter.
Your typos and grammar mistakes are UNACCEPTABLLLLLLLLLE!! TEN YEEEEEEEARS DUNGEON!!
But seriously, this needs editing. I'm not going to sit here and pick it apart for errors. I do, however, want to point out this one thing:
"Infamous" and "famous" are not interchangeable words. "Infamous" is synonymous with "notorious", "terrible", and so forth.
Apart from the technical problems...I enjoyed this chapter. I can almost FEEL the "Oh CRAP" vibes off the ponies as they realize something is going horribly wrong with their "guest". Moving on to the next chapter now...
Was wondering how long it'd take before Lemongrab tried to eat somepony.
4034439 Oh, okay...