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Diamond Sparkle


I am pleased I joined here and hope to rp on YM with someone.

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Alula absolutely loves and almost worships Diamond Tiara, and when she accidently breaks the crown that Diamond values so much, she decides to make her a replacement.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Alula the stalker amuses me for some reason. Please continue.

I fear for the Romeo is approaching the end of mortal life.

Comment posted by linkman443 deleted Aug 8th, 2019

This seems rushed.:ajbemused: It's good, don't get me wrong, but it's rushed.:applejackunsure:

Why did you decide to stop writing this story?

Alula is rather...stalkerish in this fan fiction to say the least. But she does mean well, she just does things in the wrong way.

That´s probably a really nice new thing to have in a story, please just let her be like that for a bit.
The " I love Diamond Cutiemark" thing, was funny in a way.

this chapter was not as good as the first one. It looks rushed, somehow what the guard said was a bit off, maybe because it was strange in the first place that he was their, even if part of me can actually see it happen.

I think Diamond was a bit to forgiving there, and how did Diamond suddenly knew what her cutiemark meant? I mean you never described it I think, or at least you made it look like she haven´t even noticed it.

awwww and it happened again.
This was probably one of the storys, that where added to a group I joined, even if the story most likely would not be finished.

Don´t get me wrong, I somehow like this story, but I don´t get why this was taken into a group "2016", when the last chapter was updated in "2013". I just noticed it myself, and before I thought awesome a new story, but now I´m just dissapointed that I have read something, which probably doesn´t get another chapter.

Why do so many groups want to keep cancelled, or even that long abandoned storys?

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