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Princess Celestia has found something very troubling. The world that theirs came from was originally part of another and the bond between the worlds are knitting them back together. Sadly, this other world contains horrible monsters that will overrun her little ponies. To stop this threat, she relies on the help of two young duellists that she will have to forcibly pull into her world.
Will they be their Saviours?
Or their Destruction?
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Thanks, I'll get onto it when I can. :3
Pretty solid so far, though there are some weird things here and there, like some grammatical errors, and a few out of place lines, like bluntly stating out Applejack and her Element with no real transition. Another thing to work on might be pacing too, it doesn't give any time to let the moment really sink in.
All mistakes aside, this is a very interesting idea, and I can't wait to see it be developed.
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Thanks for the support. As for the critique... I didn't realise any problem with the into to Applejack or the others, though I'll take your word for it.
As for the inconsistency, this story is the creation of two authors. Myself and someone else. I write up the final draft however. Keeping both sides, with different writing styles, is pretty challenging when placing them together. Thankfully it didn't make a full mess. :P
In which Yu-Gi-Oh! series does this story take place in? After the second series anime, Yu-Gi-Oh! GX, or Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's? I recommend you base the characters and add cards to their decks form the most recent Yu-Gi-Oh! series: Yu-Gi-Oh! ZEXAL.
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It is based after the whole series is said and done. Egyptian God cards are myths to some, Syncro and XYZ monsters are the norm and numbers are nearly all but diminished. The only numbers that exist are reprinted ones with supposedly no special powers.
Some cards were reprinted such as the Neo-Spacions and the Toons, though some cards such as 'The Seal of Orhicalcos' were not for obvious reasons.
3101900 What kind of decks do they use?
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Well, Crystal already explained that she uses Ninja's and Darkworld.
Baku mostly only uses one type of deck, Hieratic Dragons..
Maybe one of your characters can have the ability to communicate with duel spirits, like Jaden Yuki.
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That would be redundant via the fact monsters can be brought to their physical forms in that world.
being late is an understatement. XD
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Indeed, though since this is a Co-op, it's kind of hard to do it with only one side. However, we planned ahead and I know the gist of what to write down. The problem is finding time, life get's in the way a lot. Most of the time, I am writing this at 1 in the morning at the weekends. XD
The whole saying the turn count and the lifepoints after every turn got a bit annoying, but good story. I also want to punch Dark Mist in the face, but I'd go right through him.
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The turn counts were mostly for effects like Gold Sarcophagus. And the damage counter was only recorded when someone took damage.
To be honest, it looked a lot better in Microsoft Word. A lot of errors came through that I need to fix. One such error... Why is 'armor' capitalized?
3107188 well done but you put your name in where baku's shoulda been only complaint.(opinion:aj is acting just a little bit overboard and paranoid also if they could do that what makes her think they CAN be contained!?!)
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Glad that someone pointed out AJ's behavior, though that will be explained in time. :3
3850262 i retract my earlier argument but ajs got a barn load of apologizing ta do!
3879123 are there gonna be other humans are you gonna have a chazz oh boy i hope there's a kaiba!!!
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This story takes place after all the series, so Chazz and Kaiba 'may' not appear.
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Indeed, though her mood will be explained later. :3
3879379 i ment a character that fulfills the same role as them/has a similar personality.
If you need fictional card series i have some ideas here's what i have tell me if your interested: gunslingers,ponies,AAR(Advanced Alien Resistance),dragoons,and mimics.
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I think I'll be okay for now. :P
I have to find time to write it first. XD
3917916 k let me know if you need help aright?
pretty great there. were the cards used real, made up or a combination?
excellent story and chapter
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The cards used were real, though a bit outdated now. I think I may have to redo this story. :S
nice work love it
Why didn't she mention Spike too?
He's literally RIGHT THERE with them.
So he doesn't count as a friend then? Why?
Will this fic continue?
MLP/YGO fics are alot of fun.
Any plans for Spike?
Not really liking how Luna was easily captured off-screen and needing rescue like that.
Its just embarrassing and makes her look weak while continuing the whole worf effect issue from the show.