...I kind of want to rag on you about how this isn't the sequel to On a Cross and Arrow, but I figure that you don't want that to completely define your writing.

I'll just shut up and read now.

Just finished reading it, I keep thinking of the story thing Equestria Daily set up that challenged fanfic writers to write something about Rainbow Dash cooking. The recipe for Appfelpfankuchen (how is that pronounced?!) after the story was a nice touch.

Even though I'm full from dinner, I have the urge to make some appfelpfankuchen...

This was fucking amazing. Dash trying to cook? So awesome. Also, you're still ridiculously good at writing Pinkie.

Ooh, actual recipe. Do want to try it.

I suddenly have the urge for some applefan... appfelchan... applenan... Jackie Chan... grrrrrr...

APPLE PANCAKES.

I just had a fantastic brunch thanks to this story. I did not expect this to happen today.

Good read and looks like something i will have to try sometime, Once again you impress me. I hope the next part of "On a Cross and Arrow"

Comes out really soon.

Your Faithful reader,

-Tidaka Tathaos

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I agree with all of the above, and will also do my best to refrain from comenting on the lack of continuation of "On a Cross and Arrow" for the time being. I wrote up a few drafts for it, but have since learned that I lack your writing soul and style.

... I'm taking donations in both catagories, by the way. Just gonna put my rep's number below.

The number is: (666) 531-8042

But, if you aren't willing to donate, then could you please... please, please, please continue that amazing, wonderful, heartwrenchingly lovely, story? Please? Ugh, I'll await a reply, if you want to give one, of course. My gut is complaining because I can't find any golden delicious. Oh, well... printing complete! time to hit: the store!

The bottom of the pan...   

Seriously Dash!

Is there a reason, that you used the wrong orthographie for "Apfelpfannkuchen"?

That Appfelpfankuchen looks so delicious. :D

Best part: This was awesome and new

Worst part: This could so easily have been me

I'm a horrible cook!

-Glassed

Holy friggin' crap that looks good.... *drools*

Oh yeah, great read, too!

The bottom of the pan....

Wow. I love little things like that.

Okay, first you give me a good fic and then a recipe that makes my mouth water?

Well played good sir, too bad I'm worse than RD in the kitchen.

Gotta say I'm worse than RD. I cooked for the first time last year and got food sickness, heh... from soup. The amount of times I almost set the cooker or oven on fire... needless to say, I got thrown out of class a couple months later.

Good story.

That sounds DELICIOUS!

Also, my mom always uses that quote, "Don't quit your day job." Do you know where its form? I've never heard anyone else use it before.

ALSO, I have now read every one of your stories on FIMFiction except "Crimps and Prance," and I've loved EVERY SINGLE ONE.

Though I am wondering, whats holding back On a "Whisper of Wind?" "On a Cross and Arrow" is one of my favorite stories, and I was really looking forward to the sequel. What you have seems to have quite a bit of potential. I hope you continue with it soon.

Lastly (probably), how do you pronunce Appfelpfankuchen?

lemon drops and and ... oh man

Only Dash hehe

I once tried to make oatmeal cookies for home economics class.  The cookies ended up being a lumpy paste.  I think I forgot an important ingredient -- flour.