How do you fight something that is the perfect predator against creatures that know how to comprehend fear? Simple: you run. You run and pray it follows something else, as the Mane Six find out in this horror/slasher fic.
Very original idea. I like it a lot. Could have used some work fixing errors (like "wretched", which should be "retched), but other than that, good stuff
Very good, yet disturbing story. LOVE IT!!!
Oh, and pleeeeeeaaaaaaase continue it!
This was my entry for the February Write-Off. I didn't plan on continuing it, not really anywhere for it to go aside from being a short story, in my eyes.
I understand it was for the write off, but I still enjoyed this fic and would've been interested in an ending.
Well I can give it a shot at some point I suppose, but that was supposed to be the ending.