Bellerophon is found on the verge of death at the outskirts of the Everfree Forest. But instead of Fluttershy, Lero is found by Granny Smith Apple along the borders of Sweet Apple Acres. How will this change things for him, and what about everyone else?
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I would like to thank Banchoking and Permanent Temporary, without whom this would not have been possible.
Weeheehee
that last line just killed me
Oh god, oh god, I now have a mental image of Granny Smith and Lero banging.
Ew, ew, ew, ew, ew, ew, ewwwww.
ZELDAAAAAAAAAAAA
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God dammit, I was enjoying the warm fuzzies, then you gotta put that image in my head. I hope you have enough brain bleach for two!
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Ewwww, mental image of Lero eating out Granny Smith's moldy snatch.
Ok, 2 chapters in and I'm loving this!! Granny Smith is awesome, her history with her herd even more so! I do hope some of the others there make an appearance. If anypony deserves to have a few regrets laid to rest, it's her. Also, AJ and Lero dynamic...I suddenly feel curious as to how this is gunna go.
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*Gives you all gentle whaps on the back of the head.*. Look, the elderly are simply old, not dead. If they find it safe, comfortable, and enjoyable to engage in such activities, there's nothing wrong wih that, and we certainly shouldn't begrudge them that! You would be so lucky!
That said, while Granny Smith certainly finds Lero attractive, she seems more interested in fixing him up with AJ than landing him herself... Which is really like her anyhow. She'd rather give her grandchild decades or happiness than try to grab a few for herself.
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I'm kinda confused about the implication that ponies can't breed with zebra. They can in real life.
This seems like an interesting story, and I look forward to reading more. Plus the Zecora tag has got me hopeful thst she will be one of thevlove interests.
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Yeees, but I saw my grandparents bang when I was a kid and never recovered.
... Ew ew ew ew ewwwww.
Granny Smith X Human. The road less traveled
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I'll enjoy seeing how Applejack and Lero get along!
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I never said it had anything to do with her race.
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I figured that was one possibility- however, as it wasn't spelled out...
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Yes, The elderly still being active in their golden years is a wonderful thing. But it is like the mother who says she will tell you your punishment tomorrow. What you imagine will be soo much worse than the reality.
another good story of my favorite verse awesome!
Quite a way to start the series I say.
Noooo! Keep running girls!!
Love it!
Oh boy
Time for lero to save the day
Always trouble following close behind.
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Yay, I got mentioned.
My inner attention whore is appeased... for now.
Great chapter, but there's too many commas. Tone down on those, it let me edit for ya, and I'll help get them under control.
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Ah, sorry I didn't respond to this comment sooner, I've been rather busy as of late. Thank you for your honest opinion, I'm a little new to creative writing and have always had an inexplicable fondness for run-on sentences, even when speaking; this, coupled with my lack of grammar-fu means that I'm a bit more fond of comma's than I have any right to be. Honestly I'd be willing to let you take a crack at it, I already have a beta, but another opinion is always welcome.
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Hey did you hear about Permanent Temporary? That guy is hooooooot.
2969224 Oh Lord, you poor soul :(
Well I'll have to continue this story after I read the oneshot :3 I'm interested on what happens!
wait I commented here?? how come I don't remember this place! D: well im faving now so I dont forget xD
Oh snap!
hope to see more!
Story abandoned on a cliffhanger... uncool brah, uncool.
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Ugh, I know, I know... ironic how that's always been a pet peeve of mine.
It's just that this is my first real story, leading up to my first real action scene, and a whole ton of crazy @#$% has been happening at home...
In any case, excuses aside, I fully intend to continue working on this story. I still have a number of chapters planned out, and afterwards... well, we'll just see where my muse takes me.
Welcome back to the land of the living, and congratulations on another good chapter.
Now see, what would be cool would be to see the events of the Everfree fight from the perspective of the CMC.
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Thank you! I was very worried about how this chapter would be received, it does include my first action scene after all.
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That right there is a good idea, that is actually a very good idea, now why didn't I think of that?
Now the only question is whether to add it to this chapter or the next.
Nice work mate.
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The next one. If you add it to this one then the people who have already read it(like me!) won't be alerted, unless you unpublish and then republish which could be interpreted as trying to abuse the heat system and get you in trouble.
Im glad to see this is alive
Excellent stuff.
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
an update excellent and very good
'll wait forward to the next chapter
I like this alternate take on the xenoverse. I'm curious to see where you take it.
Other than that nice job on this chapter.
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cant wait for more of this
This chapter brought to you in part by Strangelove and Genesis1212, thanks for all your help guys.
*Also Mad Library Scientist who gave me the idea for this chapter in the first place.*
Good chapter. Please more
Zecora lines are a bitch to write.
Why do I hope Zecora will be part of Lero's hard?....Anyway, it was a good chapter.
~Hearn
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well i hope lero will be ok. But im curious to how everyone is going to react to what happen. Also you did a good job on Zecoras lines. And i have to agree with Mortal Kombat Brony that they cant be easy to write
if ends up as a herd hope AJ is in it.
