(I'm going to be adding more chapters once a week, or whenever i can get my lazy ass up and write.)
Everyone knows of Luna's tragic and upsetting tale. But do they fully understand and know why it happened? Everyone's a confused as Celestia. And til' this day, all Luna can remember is the pain and suffering from it all.
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Big fan of any story that explores Luna's backstory and emotional turmoil. Well done so far, I'm going to follow this.
Also, don't forget to promote your story in groups. Otherwise, people will onky see it for a few hours each tine you update it. If you put it in a group, everyone there will see it, and grouo folders are often searched by would be readers looking for good stories.
2966654 I can agree to that. It is that luna has three forms, whilst celestia only has one, and two if you count fan fiction. This got me thinking:"Why can celestia not do that? Her magic is just as powerful if not more than Luna. Is it maybe some kind of spell? A MEMORRY SEALING SPELL? Some kind of gradually degrading spell on the subconscious part of her Nightmare Night part of the brain?"
It would explain why she can't turn in a minicorn.
I would not know less. Luna is best pony. Hands down.
Hurr durr.
2966870 Thank you
2967605 I think i'll try to figure out something as an explanation in the next chapter!
Thank you!
2968535 Always at your service.
Hure dure!
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Well tough shit, cause imma point out some mistakes (sarcasm comes free of charge).
Unless Celestia is an anthro character for some weird reason, this is wrong.
The 'I' should always be capitalized.
That whole sentence seems kinda wrong, it just doesn't flow well.
I didn't notice any other mistakes, so well done. Also, sorry for any perceived harshness; I've been running on caffeine and conspiracy theories for the past few hours.
History is written by victors, so you could have Luna discover that Celestia and Twilight have some 'big plans' against Luna (but this turns out as nothing more than a birthday party for her) but it will lead to paranoia on Luna's part, causing her to say things to Celestia which will make Celestia see the truth (and possibly hurt her badly)
2984566 That's absofruitly AWESOME! Thank you!!