I tip my hat to you, sir or mam

Well, I must confess I am not a big fan of shipping, but you certainly pulled off the regretful angle. Rarity's thoughts were very well ordered and the internal conflict was well illustrated. You at one point refer to Fluttershy as Pinkie Pie and it really threw me off for like a minute.  Well not much more to say here, you had a decent plot with the characters acting almost realistically, bar the shipping angle of course.

I thought it was very good! Well written and a good story, me being a fan of shipping AND Rarity is a plus.

I thought you expressed her regret very good, like she really sincerely meant it. I would love to read another story from you.

MEGUSTA

>>245152245152   ... what if its AND!?

>>248545248545   I looked back over, and I'm guessing you refer to the line "...and I see the largest smile I have ever seen outside of Pinkie Pie." Maybe its a little unclear, but all I'm saying is that Fluttershy at that moment has the second biggest smile, first belonging to Pinkie. Maybe a little unclear yeah, and I probably SHOULD edit it if this weren't a story for the contest.

>>259484259484   For whatever reason, even though Rarity isn't my favorite pony by a long shot (2nd least fav in mane 6), I tend to like to write her character a lot.

>>302525302525   ¡No hablo Español!

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>>310655310655 My apologies, that actually makes perfect sense. I read it as out of Pinkie Pie rather than outside of Pinkie Pie. Maybe next time I shouldn't be reading at 2 in the morning.

This romance contains Fluttershy. Instant read!

In all seriousness, Fluttershy and Rarity are my favourite couple, mostly because they are best friends in the show, so I assume they would be the most realistic. But still, Fluttershy was happy, so

Wow. Color me impressed (its a kind of metalic rainbow with a forest moss underlayer and a few shines of pink). This is the only well written Flutterare fic I have seen. I'd tip my hat to you, but I don't have one, so I will now go and steal one to tip.

I really like how you personified the inferno, and gave it a sort of a personality. I tip my fez to you sir. Question: Why are there no happy Fluttershy emoticons?

Anyway, have a cool guy

  My respect to you. Being not very much of a shipping stories lover, I can tell you I liked this one really much. It's really a work of art and I'm sure to reread it later. P.S. I wish you would write more suchlike stories, you are good at writing them.

Great story! I enjoyed reading it!