I've been told that I'm a touch... out of touch? I guess it comes from being a Marty Stu, type green, god... whatever you prefer to call my kind. Any way you slice it, reality bends to my will. That means I can do whatever I want. But really, what does that mean? Is anything I do worth doing, if I just snap my fingers and get it right away? I don't think so anymore. I think I need to slow down, and try to get my morals back on track.
Wait, what was I talking about? Sorry, I'm a touch scatterbrained. Let me start at the beginning, when I thought I had made Equestria...
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I would give this one a thumbs up because I also have had an idea similar to this about a reality bending, world creating god interacting with the MLP universe (although my idea is still quite different). However, the randomness and confusing choppy writing makes it hard to really get into the whole thing, so I'll remain neutral. I am interested in how it turns out, so I'll watch it from afar.
I like stories like these, where we dive into the mind of a Marty Stu and/or Mary Sue.
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so is this a story of self discovery?
wow ponies judge pretty harshly that time xeno hater much but hey he can escape anytime he want to.
Love it and can't wait to see what happens next!
My Little Pony: Friendship is Racist
Are you going to become Discord? What a Twist
I almost thought your character was smarter than trying to just block the Elements of Harmony no matter how powerful he thinks he is. Always teleport if you can. Always. I think Piccollo said it best:
Now I'm wondering of the nuances of his reality warping power. If he does it on too grand a scale does he just teleport to an alternate reality where what he wanted is true? For example when he was in the humanized Equestria and then went to the pony Equestria was it changed or did he simply go to the one where the ponies are. Of coarse with a racist dictator that will stonify anything that can threaten her absolute totalitarianism.
I like that you're not taking yourself too seriously, and I hope you continue to have fun writing this. I look forward to more.
You've inspired me to make a new group.
It's called or The Reality-warpers and Overpowered Lollygagger's League, or T.R.O.L.L. for short. Oh yes I did.
They will love us
This story will be honored as the first one put on there.
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QUIT GIVING AWAY PLOT POINTS!
Gawd, with your stupid face and your hilarious comment and link to that awesome video...
Wait, I know how to react to suddenly being put on the spot, where I need to be responsible and actually go into-
DODGE!!!
WARNING: SPOILER! Do not keep reading unless you want me to explain myself (which I just said I wasn't going to do...?)!
I'll probably be going over this in the next chapter anyway, but they totally blind-sided him. Riddle me this: if you're lulled into a false sense of security and you HAVEN'T practiced dodging everything before, would you suddenly dodge something being thrown at your face, or would you react as you always had and try to block it? Especially if blocking had worked against pretty much everything you'd had thrown at you up till this point?
END SPOILERS! ...I LIED! SNAPE KILLS DUMBLEDORE!
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I'd be honored to have the responsibility of being the first-
DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODGE!!!