When Twilight Sparkle recieves an urgent letter from Princess Celestia, her and her five friends embark an adventure that's anything but fun and relaxing.
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Woah. Intriguing.
I wonder where it's all going...
I really cant guess what this might be so I would like to see the rest once you have finished... if umm... thats okay with you i gues.....
This is winning. Great idea, amazing execution.
I love the picture.
link?
It was sitting in my "PonyPics" folder for quite some time now, but I think it works rather well. Maybe I'll post it on a Photobucket account or something later.
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http://uc77.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4iruur
Dood draws hot-blooded ponies and I love it!
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Thanks
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Hehe, Thank you!
Man, this sounds like its gonna be good and horrible (in a kinda... Oh I cant find the word... grand in a weird way? Sure, why not) at the same time. Im tracking and waiting for more :D
"Ethal Co" is somepony you'd call a fanfic writers "Little Accident"
I originally didn't plan him being there, but quickly I fell inlove with him. and I can't even remember why,,, 
oh mai gawd...is that HOT BLOODED PINKIE PIE!?
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When in doubt
Pinkie Pie out
nice. Something about that Ethal seems weird. not like a BG pony, but like a bad guy in desguise...
251348B agreed there's something fishy about that pony.
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Anyone stealing Twilight's library is bad news.
255147 *Anypony
**Edit**
sorry...
Also I just noticed that the story didn't save the divide lines, so I'm gunna have to reedit this real fast.
**Edit-2**
I'll know better this time.
Wasn't that much to change at all, just added some divide lines,
Definently a must read for interesting story purposes, but I'm just a bit iffy with some of the narritive and quotation techniques used as well as how Dash acts.
I'm not sure if such techniques are valid, but I know I still got quite a bit to learn on my end as I write mine. 
Im not bashing, the story is great and im learning quite a bit from this that I may use.
Interesting stuff again, can't wait to see how it unfolds more.
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Yes, when I realised how many times I made Twilight "sigh" in an indefinate amount of times, I couldn't BELIEVE how much It just seemed... off...
As with Rainbow Dash
I wrote this story right after Dragonshy came out. I had NO PLANS of continuing the Series after that, that's probably by Rainbow Dash doesn't seem like herself.
Originally this was going to end up on Equestria Daily. But now I don't mind it. I kinda like having it on a semi-quiet community like FimFiction over anything else.
Thanks for the Feedback.
270781 Yeah guess twi doing something repeatedly may be part of it, and understandable for RDs case. I was more iffy on some of the grammer and the way you did some of the quotations (In and out quote) may seem unfamiliar to me. It didn't sound nesissarily bad but it may not be something im used to.
Im writting my own story and im doing my best to learn what to use best and its not easy. I was merely comparing this writing and mine. Sorry
Im kind of observant.
Anyways keep up the good work.
It's very strange how when you start writing, it initially takes a lot longer to write it, rather than read it.
Either way, enjoy the 3rd chapter, the 4th chapter I have no idea when it'll be out
, but do expect it soon.
ETHAL! I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING UP WITH YOU! WHY'D YOU TAKE THE TABLET? WHERE'S THE BAG? YOU'RE NOT HELPING YOUR CASE! I'M ON TO YOU!
Everyone and their cliffhangers =.=
Hey bro, its hybrid, i created an account on here so i can follow your stories
Finally we get to start venturing in the next chapter! I know this story is very slow, but now it'll start speeding up! (Not to quickly, but heck
) So get your goggles ready or something... I-I dunno! 
On another note, Cloud Whisper and Midnight Sonata were both inside jokes for me and a friend of mine, who always insisted that ponies names were based off songs or works or liiterature (TV's/Movies/Plays). Midnight Sonata obviously being "Moonlight Sonata" and Cloud Whisper making fun of "Ghost Whisper".
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-sigh- oh kro
very nice. Ethal seems way too non-suspicious now... im beginning to think he's not that bad. and the (master). He's the one from the vision