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JaketheGinger


There are a few Jakes on this website. I'm the ginger one.

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The Everfree forest. A place of mystery, strangeness... and danger. Most ponies are too careful to enter the dark woods and rightly so. As a result, it has been centuries since the last recorded timberwolf killing.

But when Lyra heads into the forest herself to gain inspiration from its unique surroundings, she is about to discover a horrifying secret behind the timberwolves... one that will change her life forever.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 28 )

Oh this sounds really interesting. I will be reading this later!

Nice opening. Definitely curious to see where you go from here.

Niiiice. The description got me interested and the content did not disappoint

Timberwerewolves? DO WANT!!!

Kinda saw the transformation coming. Nice flow though, silly pony think she can use her horn.

Nice work so far.

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This.
Like wher this is going. I wonder if she'll be strong enough to stay more pony, or succumb. Curious.

2945363 Think she'll be made of dogwood?

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:rainbowderp::facehoof:
I think that covers my reaction pretty well...

Very nice, this could be the beginning of a great story.

But i'll be cynical instead, why are there 6 "it" in the first paragraph,? You don't do use "it" that way in the rest of the chapter, yet it made me want to instantly stop reading. I continued because I knew had already written 14 stories, but I would have stopped if I didn't know that. I would recommend re-writing that... just so that you don't scare away your readers with an extremely annoying first paragraph.

Oh gosh... Applejack is a murderer?? :applejackunsure::applejackunsure::applejackunsure:

2951576 My work here is done. :ajsmug:

More chapters please

needs more chapters please...:twilightsheepish:

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHEN VILL U UPDATTTTTTTTTTTTE!

I hate to be the one to say this, but I absolutely loved where this story was going. Yet there hasn't been an update in months. WHERE ARE YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not bad, keep it up and I! WILL! READ!

Hmm. I'm intrigued, but I see that this hasn't been updated in nearly 2 years. Well, that's too bad. :ajsleepy:

An update is needed!

i'd love to see where you were going with this. i enjoyed reading this chapter

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What they said, Moaoooor!

This honestly feels complete enough, not sure why it's marked as incomplete.

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