After almost everyone in her stable is killed by raiders, Diamond Sky sets out to find the three other survivors who escaped. With the help of her new friends, an extremely strong earth pony, and an eccentric unicorn, can she cope with her loss, find the survivors of the massacre, and learn to find beauty in the bleakest of places?
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Agreed.
It has potential... For now I'm not very interested... Sorry... Keep trying!
Wat?
Well... I read the other Fallout Equestria and this may be good so I will be waiting but Fallout Equestria was literally the best thing I have ever read and I do a fair amount of reading.
The cover is good! Really good! I will need to read this also, if any of you don't like FoE stories GTFO you didn't need to read this, or have comment on it. If it's that bad to were you need to come and diss on people for the idea than piss off. I'm not trying to sound angry, (It looks that way though lol) but you guys need to understand that FoE is just part of our community. (Our group) We our selves enjoy each others side fics, but that doesn't mean that we alone can read them, no! Anyone can enjoy them, and let me say that again enjoy them if you don't like them stay away. It's only common for humans to stay away from something they don't like. I'm not raging I'm just stating that if you don't like them stay away.
Okay, this is good. Although you need to get someone to quickly proofread I would recommend you keep going. I don't really see why others are hating on it because this was pretty well done. You jumped into it a little fast but if you add a little more detail and stuff into each chapter than congrats you got a story! I kinda want to see what happens next so I'll track it!
KIU, also don't mind the others who are raging they all hate FoE fics, I should know they did the same to me, but I'm on top now. lol
-Noakwolf
Nice to see another FOE Side Story!
The premise is interesting. I think this story has a lot of potential. Keep it up! (And please, don't let trolls like LaVedier get to you. Keep writing and enjoy your characters' time in the Equestrian Wasteland!)
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Thanks, guys
Short chapters with frequent updates sounds good to me.... Keep up the good work and lets see where this ride takes us....
I'll have to read chapter 2 when I get the chance, I might even mention this in DJ-Noakwolf.
Yay she's not a lesbian! I love this story!
I don't see the hate. It's short, sweet, and the story is enjoyable.
Wow another update, will read later.
I a likea dis story.
new chapter yay wasnt a long chapter still good though
cant wait for the next 
Thanks, I'll try to get a new, longer, chapter up soon
Awesome new chapter
she is becoming a new hero
yay
lawl shex gotta love slurs
Ooooooh a long chapter
Me likey.
I said it'd be longer.
I'm tring to keep chapter around this long from now on.
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I see, but man in the past 2 days you dished out 3 chapters! That's a lot, and I have to say you need to slow down a bit. I like the story but man I can't keep up if you up date 2 time a day!
Sorry, I just really felt like writing.
I should have probably waited to update it.
oh shiii shes going to commit suicicde
cant wait for the next chapter 
I hope they stop her before she does and whens the next chapter?
I'll try to get it up by Saturday.
NOOOOOOOOOOO DON'T DO IT you've got raiders to kill
And those raiders are screwed
I may post the next chapter tomorrow, It depends if I have enough time.
I would have updated the story yesterday, but I got a new book, and I was reading for the rest of the day
The next chapter might take awhile, I've writers block now
Starswirl the Bearded Twi is Jelly
still awesome chapter
And sorry about the writers block happens to the best of us sometimes
yay new chapter cant wait for the next you ended it with a cliffhanger
woah 1/2 years dang thats long cant wait for the next chapter
OH WOW a coma didn't see that coming
new chapter yay and Red Eye wants him dead wonder why cant wait for the next
Well damm stable murder
nice chapter cant wait for the next
good chapter and shes un conscious again
New chapter!
Sorry 'bout the wait, life and writer's block are very annoying
but I'm going to try to update more regularly
good very good
Is glorious.
thanks
I'm working on the next chapter, I'll probably have it up Monday.
good chapter again
Well its monday!
A lot of things came of recently. but hay, new chapter!
No date for the next chapter this time, sorry.
good chapter again but could be longer
This story isn't dead yet!
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And I have to say this little chapter was very much better then the last. Or at least it seems that way to me. I look forward to another chapter!
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Thanks.
New Chapter, just a little late for hearts and hooves
Oh god this made me laugh like a retard because it reminded me of how microsoft sam (the text to speech program) can't say "wasteman" properly. Instead he says "wast-man" or "waste-e-man". But all that aside you really need to fix that error in your title, especially after all this time of having your fic up.
Also, chapter seventeen needs to be capitalized like all the rest.
2125111 How the heck did I miss that 'e'
thanks for pointing that out.
also, I would fix chapter seventeen, but, I don't know how.
So not the worst Fo:E chapter that I have read to date, but I think that it is maybe one of the shortest. Normally am I against those things, feeling that the writer can´t cram enough story down into a 1K chapter to make it work, but it seem that you can do it fairly well actually. It is just sad that there is no real hook for me in your story, that it just look like the normal "Stable gets raided", even trough the main character have and acts around a gun like it is almost nothing, until she had to shoot it, making the Stable sound a bit different if they allowed civilians to bring the guns they owned.
Beside the missing hook was there also to many small mistakes, most of them having to do with spaces mind you, so it is not so bad again, but bad enough for me and my work damage that I have gotten as pre-reader.
Nitpicks
"Faster and faster" Your comma is on the wrong side of the space after this sentence.
"Inside was an old revolver my father gave me before he died" You have a double space before this sentence.
"“...But" You are missing a space after your ellipses.
“I’ve heard enough of you’re shit" You have a double space before this.
"I don’t wanna hear you’re bitching on top of it.” You do not need a period after a dialogue as you have here.
"I levitated my revolver and switched on the S.A.T.S system on my Pipbuck." Not really a mistake, but you have two on fairly close here and that make it sound odd/clunky.
"They may have been the ones to kill my mother or, or my best friend. and I killed them? Was I has evil as them?" So four in one go. You are missing a space at the start of all this, have a double or, a lower-case a in your and after a period, and a had to many in your first as, even if that would give you two as rather close to each other
"and they’d probably killed hundreds more." You have a double space here.
"I walked up to a nearby sink" And another one here in the start of this sentence.
"At least it would be painless" Your comma are on the wrong side of the " here.
"I checked the EFS on my Pip" You do also have a double space as a beginning of this dialogue.