Is something that is tainted by hell always corrupted by it or ruled by it?
On a cold dark night a small child is taken by the worst kind of humanity and imbued with unholy powers. The ability to change into any creature fictional or otherwise and to see someone's worst fears and if he wanted to make them come true. And ever since escaping he has run from those who wish to use him or harm him. Until he is finally captured and is sent to equestria by mistake. Can he convince those around him he isn't ruled by darkness. And when everything is on the line will he stay strong with his friends and see them all survive the dangers to come? And can he show a desperate queen that its always best to do the right thing even when the odds are stacked against you.
I nice start to a story. I do hope to see more of it soon. My only complaint is that the chapters are to small. Keep up the good work.
Dragonfox
3174108thanks im glad you like it ill try to make the chapters longer from now on
nice
epic
even more epic
3174123 whooo longer chapter's for the win
I love the song reference to 'Children of the Night'. Awesome so far.
3182356 thank you im glad you like it
their will be even further reference to that song and its events later in the story
Man, Equestria is Hell? That's messed up Samuel!
3182392 Yay!
Grate Chapter. I love to see more! I do hope you keep up the good work.
Dragonfox
Your first story was great and I feel this one will be no less of a master piece but I have to say the few grammar errors are not that bad but you should try to make the chapters longer
Nice chapter.
keep going and making new chapter's
So, Twilight. That's the magic of friendship you've been learning for the past couple of years?
(the emoticon is ironic...)
3213181 I agree.
Still loving the song references and this fic!
sorry hit the wrong button
will have up soon
Make MORE!!! Pllllleeeeeaaaaaassssssseeeee
Does he stay human in this, or change into a pony?
So... Next chapter soon?
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz 
3236425 he isn't even fully human
Epic story keep making the chapters their super awesome
Minor spelling and grammar mistakes, as well as some with tense. Other than that I think the concept is fantastic, I don't know if it's finished but if it isn't keep on going.
Thomas is best shape-shifting demon creature bound to hell.
I might take this story a little more seriously if the title wasn't so badly misspelled. I'm pretty sure you mean "beginnings". Unless you meant, "begging" which I doubt, because it wouldn't make much sense in context.
3250080 fixed thanks for pointing that out
cant wait for more to be uploaded
I really like this story. I wonder when the romance will start and I'm pretty sure he might just fall for princess luna?
a nice chapter. It look like he has found a friend at last. I hope he dos not wakes up in a prison? It wood be funny if Queen Chrysalis can make him a friend and not Princess Celestia.
You are doing a grate job on the story, Keep up the grate work.
Dragonfox
Good stuff. I like where this is going. Keep up the good work.
Another reference! Yes!
I love this story and all its glory!
Dude is there a update soon?
3255881 depends on my Internet it's been screwing up a lot lately sorry
You have been favorited my friend. Make me proud and prosper and show me what a true dark love story is like
3257973 ill do my best thanks for the favorite
Nice reference, I assume when he changes shape he also changes his voice? Knowing that would make that bit even more awesome.
3262600 yes he does change his voice..... Probably should have said that and thanks I'm glad someone got who he became
Whoa, didn't see that one coming.
Awesome chapter!
When I heard the mate thing I was all like what is celestia going to do then I was like oh nothing because my brain did not want to think also plot twist
why so many riddick references but still good
3319366 Why not Riddick is awesome besides
3319467yeh riddick is awesome can't wait to see the new movie it's gonna b good
also can he change into immortal animals such as roc or like a gods pet or something that would be pretty cool but ah little OP
also if he can turn into something fictional can he just make some crazy op creature and turn into it
3320089 he can turn into just about anything even the creatures from pitch black but he wont be doing a whole lot of shape changing past a couple of forms to be later revealed in the story. One such form Luna and Celestia will know intimately and cause some interesting memory's to be brought up.
And I cant wait to see it either looks like it will be well worth the wait
3320285well ok just keep working on the chapter's=)
Yay updated my life is better now but still thomas slapping queen chrysalis ass
but still funny as hell quite literally
sorry for bad joke it's 4:39 on the dot well time for sleep can't wait for the next update
To be honest I probably would have slapped her ass too just out of habit and the moment
I like Hollywood Undead's songs Young and Bullet. Didn't like that one so much, but whatever. I also haven't heard Into The Night in forever and was ecstatic to hear it again! (Used to love that song so much.) Great chapter and can't wait for more!
3182445 FUCK YOU SAMUEL!
Yes a great chapter, It seem that Chrysalis is not the monster that the ponys think she is. She is trying to keep her people alive. Maybe Thomas can be the bridge that is needed for the two Peoples to work fore pees. He has the Princess Celestia and Luna atenchen from his last visit. I look forward to the next Chapter you write for this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Dragonfox