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Higherbeach


I write pony fiction and I love it! Tell me what you think and you never know, I may use it!

Comments ( 21 )

I think the part I liked best was that they both had secret tragedy in their pasts.

Gave them something to really bond with when they shared.

I'll be waiting for whatever else you decide to grace with in the future, really enjoyed this. :twilightsmile:

I thought she was ravished by the landlord... How does she still have her hynem? Unless of course... The landlord only had a few inches to him...

3551368 If you don't have sex for long enough, the hymen can regrow (a strange fact of life). It takes a while, but AJ had a while. Not to mention who said he ravaged her in the vagina.

3551399 Huh... Well, I prefer my theory. :3

3551507 So do I.:twilightsmile: Now if only this had stayed featured a few more hours...

3551510 beautifully written, great story line, good amount of action, I loved it.

3554000 Thank you for saying such kind things.:twilightsmile:

I have to say, this was quite the story.

VERY well done. Probably could have cut out a bit of the buildup, but, it worked.

Nicely done indeed.

~Skeeter The Lurker

3557003 Glad to see it met with your approval. Honestly thought this would be more popular, guess this is my fate lol. Write something somewhat bad, get people and featured for a few hours, write this and get good proofreaders and editors, five minutes of feature board.

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It's all in the timing, man.

~Skeeter The Lurker

best read in a while very well done sugercube. sequel?

3558130 probably not, but I said that for 'A Night with the Night' and a sequel is coming out for that so... who knows?:twilightblush:

:pinkiegasp: sooo good. like main character....DID NOT SEE ANY OF THAT COMING. Round of applause for the auther

Good story. The feels balanced well with the clop making it seem less like a one shot clop and more like a one shot ship with a small bit of added clop. Bravo.

I slowly worked my way down, encircling her breasts, the sounds of light moans filling the air. Her coat had no taste, though I doubted it would remain that way much longer. I finally started kissing her breasts, slowly spiraling in on her left breast towards her nipple.

this is confusing because of this line

She instinctively moved her hooves to secure me to her, to make sure I gave her all the pleasure I possibly could. Her legs, though weak from her rest, moved around me, lightly securing me in place.

How are they anthro? Bipedal with hooves or hands? Besides that it was great!

5883996 Hooves instead of feet, but otherwise they are like the picture for the story.

Ik that this all touching but when mac hears this I dont think the whole family part will be the frist thing hes thinking about I think the bloody curdling rage of you fuck my sister is ps please make sequel

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