This is definitely going into my to-read list, tracking :)

Hi all, just to let you guys know, I am an ameteur author, I'm trying my best to plan out all possible ideas for this fanfiction and many friends suggest things I could add in to twist the story a bit, I would appreciate comments (any ranging from compliments, suggestions, stuff you don't like, mistakes I make) Your views and support keeps me writing and racking my brain for better ideas!

          Till the next chapter,

          Inu

PS. Chapters may be published as batches as I tend to write a few and upload them all on the same day, forgive me if this is troublesome.

Very short, but I haven't forgotten that events still go on in Equestria as Dash lives in the human world

FIRST!! BABY

u should make a new story were he gets to go to equestria to stay with Dash

>>350588350588 sorry some things were misunderstood, The End of a Bond is not the final chapter! It is still running, I plan on wrapping it up in a few more chapters probably 4 or 5. My friends HAVE suggested me to write a sequel more focused on action/adventure instead of making my stories sad. Expect the next chapter by Saturday!

Dash must return

You could make a epiloge.

>>358124358124 or i could make a sequel, id prefer a sequel, who else?

Dash is a human awesome

>>358161358161 A sequel is rather better

Sequel would be great

>>360673360673 I'm currently working on another fic called A Brony's Tale, it'll be a one shot story (one chapter only) and it'll be human as well! Due to the lack of readers I've received from Painting our Life -6 Colors, a sequel might not be necessary but if I am, my friends already gave me an idea of what I could put in it, and I'm not sure if their ideas are the greatest (what do you guys think of an epic pony war in the human realm? Whut)

Even though I haven't yet finished reading the fic (on chapter 2 atm ._.), I'm really liking it so far.

I read the comments and sat there thinking for a few minutes: why NOT make a sequel? it wouldn't hurt anybody. Give it a shot ;)

I didn't want to point out any spelling mistakes, but this one got me:

"The look in her eyes, oh it pains me, I just couldn't say yes when she asked of

I'm going to forbid her from playing with him..."

Seems like you forgot to finish a sentence, or raphrased it and forgot to edit it...something like that :P

Could you correrct that pls? I'd like to know how that sentence ends

>>361820361820 sorry, lemme check that, i type out my stories on my ipod so i don't notice any mistakes and auto correct kill some of my sentences

edit: of has been changed to if

sequel sequel sequel sequel!!!

YOU NEED TO MAKE A SEQUEL

Nah, I can't guess who Jajob is.

Beautiful

>>519391519391 :o thank you kind sir

It's either Tim or that other scientist guy's son. Thats my guess

Epilogue Please?

>>592930592930 sequel please? maybe :P

Watching

>>593032593032 sweet, thx, make sure to check out A Brony's Tale ^.^ My latest fiction is having some problems, but I'm still working on it slowly because one reader is begging for more but worry not, more human fics are coming

Tracked this is epic

I am thoroughly glad you started this back up. I loved the original first part of the story and was saddened when I saw the 'Completed' Status in the status bar. You are not as bad as a writer as you may think.

painting our lives updated? Whow it's just yesterday when i silently wished more chapters of it.

Anyway u have a great writing style, and i can't wait to see more.

this is a beautiful story<3

If it's complete, you might as well mark it as such. Tags can mislead, and the comments suggesting that the story tagged incomplete is in fact complete can cause confusion.

InuKaT You know your story just got featured.

Good cap man.

Something explicit can be good too

I am going to take a risk, and I am going to read this.

Considering that it is a Human tagged fic, and inspired by MLD, it is exceedingly likely that I will end up tearing out your throat in frustration and annoyance.

You will receive a review sometime in the future. More likely than not, it will be chock full of cursing, irritation, insults, and vast amounts of constructive criticism. Quite possibly, there will be downvoting. I don't expect you to like it, but I do expect you to make use of what I'll say.

I am going to take a risk, and it had better be worth it to at least one of us, Inu.

Well this has been an interesting read. You have several options though with where to take this. You could keep it as one story and just keep at it until you feel its right to end it or split it off into a sequel of some sort or something. Other than that, keep up the good work Kyle Lynston!

Nothing explicit please, but a Romance would be great.

>>718607718607 You serious? :O

Wait, hes 16 How can he use a credit card and not get aressted?

>>720508720508 I'm pretty sure store clerks don't look at their ID, though it may show up as a problem in the future. No one from the past knows he's sixteen, heads up.

InuKat It was there for a few hours but then got replaced.

>>718787718787 I don't know what it is with this opening but its got me curious to see more

>>722685722685

Opening as in my more ominous than promising comment, or the prologue?

can't wait see how Dash deals with history lessons.

this is gonna rock!

The beginning of their school days together looms upon them. I have a feeling it's gonna be fricking crazy with Dash on the case.

Highschool all over again?

Image: http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/301/662/3b5.jpg

What was with the Italics?

I swear, that dream better not come true.

WHY ITALICS!?!?!?!? BECAUSE HE WANTED TO YOU TWIT!!!!!!!!!!!

Dash's attitude seems rather dismissive of Kyle. Hopefully its just a fluke  

oh no, I can see where Twilight is going with this.

also, why is all of the text italic?