• Member Since 13th Sep, 2012
  • offline last seen Feb 14th, 2018

Iam Atrie


Comments ( 7 )

Very conflicting story. I didn't hate it nor like it. I just don't know which one I should choose, like or dislike?

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You could just choose neither, man. No pressure. This was more of an experiment than a project, so I kinda expected mixed reviews. I had hoped to get more likes, but hey, you win some you lose some, right?

Anyway, what didn't you like about it? How was it conflicted? I'm still rather new, so I don't fully understand it when people are (more or less) vague.

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Well actually, I didn't dislike anything about it. Now that I think about it, I actually liked it. Besides the title, that has nothing to do with the story... At all.

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Well, thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

And the title initially had more to do with the story, in my original outline, but it just got less and less relevant. I'll work on titles and things in the future, they are always confusing to me for some reason.

The concept of the story grabbed me but the charaters seemed off and the diologe a little weak. But overall I would like to see more.

Thank you everyone for the feedback! :twilightsmile: This has certainly been a learning experience!

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