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ObabScribbler


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Truffle Shuffle gets his first crush. Candy attracts candy-lovers, after all.

Unrequited Truffle/Bon-Bon.

Written for 30 Minute Ponies, even though I missed the deadline by miiiiles by falling asleep at the wrong moment. The prompt: an unlikely first meeting results in an unlikely attraction.

Now with an audiobook version by The Living Library Player Society. ^_^ --> available here.

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Comment posted by Snuggie88 deleted Jul 21st, 2013

She was the prettiest thing Truffle had ever seen – even prettier than the biggest slice of triple chocolate cake in a dish with whipped cream, strawberry ice-cream, wafers, sprinkles and gooey chocolate sauce.

Phfff! No woman is that good looking.

This was awesome!

Written for 30 Minute Ponies
2k words in length
30 Minute Ponies

I'm guessing since you missed the deadline you added more...?

That was cute and rather hilarious. It was also nice to see Bon Bon portrayed as non-grumpy for a change.

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You never know. Some people can write terrifyingly quickly. It must be nice.

Been there, probably ate too much of that.

Splendid.

This is the first Truffle Shuffle story I have ever read.

And it was a thumpin' good 'un, at that.
Short and sweet, with sweet being a key theme here. Very good, my friend.

"Bon Bon's Bon Bons"

Heh, that's the same name I've always used in my stories. I guess it's a pretty obvious pun, huh?

That was so adorable <3 i loved it ^_^

Truffle didn’t exactly light up the gym when he tried to climb ropes or swing on the parallel bars

Well, of course not. How in Celestia's name does a pony climb a rope or swing on parallel bars?

A charming, adorable little read and I love your take on Truffle's characterization. You've done more in this short story for giving depth to my namesake than the show has done in 7 seasons. Bravo!

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